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You Give Me Life
Contributed by
strider
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Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 02:19:37 AM in AEST
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You have given me life
You give me reason to be
I know no strife
For my joy is clear for all to see
your eyes holds the reasons for my happiness
your lips puts forth joyful words – well spoken
You are my life’s brightness
Oh, how I yearn for your touch even it be a token
I am confined in your existence
My world is a wasteland
Without your presence
For I am like a child cradled in your hand
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strider
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2005-11-17 02:19:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: You Give Me Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 02:42:28 AM AEST (User
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WoW Felix this is absolutely beautiful and so heart touching. Such beautifully woven words that sing music to ones heart.
I am truly blest to have you as my friend dearest Felix. May your days forever be blest and bright. Thank you for everything. Happy tears fall from my eyes for such a heartfelt gesture.
Much love to a very dear and special friend,
~sue~ |
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Re: You Give Me Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 08:23:51 AM AEST (User
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WOW NICE POEM! ITS GOOD TO HAVE
A GOOD FRIEND... |
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Re: You Give Me Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 09:30:12 AM AEST (User
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aww that was really sweet. very touching and from the heart. A lovely poem,
hugs
Pix xx |
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Re: You Give Me Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 06:32:49 PM AEST (User
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There can be few things in this life more valuable than a true friend.
Hold onto that.
Steve |
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