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Cold
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 12:02:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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It's so cold in this household.
I go and grab your billfold.
I try to control the heat,, But It is so cold.
I fold the blankets ..But when It got so cold I unfolded them.
It's so ice -cold .
I hold on to the blankets.
I sold my heater .so all I had was my blankets.
I rolled out the electric blanket to stay warm.
I was told that it was going to be cold.
It's so stone_cold.
But at least I have my electric blanket.
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2005-11-17 00:02:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Cold
(User Rating: 1 ) by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 07:54:47 AM AEST (User
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Hey i wrote this .. And it hurts me to know
that i am getting people to read it but no
comment :( please comment me when you read this poem.. IT probably doesnt make any sense but please be nice and comment me okay .. cause when i read someones poem i always comment them!!!!^_^ |
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Re: Cold
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 01:24:21 PM AEST (User
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a very straight foward poem that captures the essence of poetry itself, nice write, i liked it,
scence or no scence it meant somthing 2u i suppose u were trying 2 express your self,
nice effort on your part, don't give up.
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Re: Cold
(User Rating: 1 ) by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 01:38:09 PM AEST (User
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Nice poem =) |
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