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forever in a promise
Contributed by
freda_burrel
on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 11:48:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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my love, i promise you,
unto this.
the second we shared,
that very first kiss.
a promise was made,
till today.
on the hugs and kisses,
you send my way.
every second in time,
i share with you.
i know exactly,
what i'm to do.
i promise to give,
unto you.
all of the things,
i said i'd do.
my love, i promise ,,
unto this.
forever my love,
a romantic bliss.
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freda_burrel
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2005-11-16 23:48:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: forever in a promise
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 12:25:19 AM AEST (User
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How romantically beautiful. I couldn't have said it better myself. I love ur poem alot. It speaks from the heart. Well done on such a wonderfully written poem. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
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Re: forever in a promise
(User Rating: 1 ) by Boof on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 09:52:17 PM AEST (User
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I'm speechless... Very very amazing poem.. |
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