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Array ( [sid] => 109863 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Old Friend [time] => 2005-11-16 14:52:43 [hometext] => I have an old friend who wants to be friend again but she hurt me really bad and then I came up with this. Tell me what you think of it please [bodytext] => She wants to be friends
But that is how it started
We were just friends
Then I got in to deep
And then I died

I said that I would never
Let her in again but
I think she learned her lesson
But have I mine

What do as time ticks away?
And still no answer
Maybe I will be just friends
But what if she wants more
What should I do?

Tick tock tick tock
Look at the clock
Tick tock tick tock
I should unlock myself
But what then

Maybe it is time to
Leave things in the past
To go one and just be friends
And nothing else
But....
Nothing. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 16 [informant] => dalamar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Old Friend

Contributed by dalamar on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 02:52:43 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

She wants to be friends
But that is how it started
We were just friends
Then I got in to deep
And then I died

I said that I would never
Let her in again but
I think she learned her lesson
But have I mine

What do as time ticks away?
And still no answer
Maybe I will be just friends
But what if she wants more
What should I do?

Tick tock tick tock
Look at the clock
Tick tock tick tock
I should unlock myself
But what then

Maybe it is time to
Leave things in the past
To go one and just be friends
And nothing else
But....
Nothing.

Copyright © dalamar ... [ 2005-11-16 14:52:43]
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Re: Old Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 03:09:37 PM AEST
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well walk with a sheild dont let her get to close
thats all
r.m.wilder

Re: Old Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 09:49:02 PM AEST
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hmm..from what i got out of your poem she must of hurt you pretty bad...she could have posibly changed her ways...but i wouldnt want to find out so quickly...maybe you should start talking to her a little bit but try not to get to close...but thats all a dicision you have to make...but good poem

Re: Old Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 06:28:30 AM AEST
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betrayal and the rebuilding of trust both rocky roads to walk down, well expressed :-)

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