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my radio seems to skip
pills from trying to overdose lies here beneath my feet
drinking until the moon shines it glare in to my window
i'm scaring myself half to death because i never can here my heart beat
tears roll down my face
please tell me do you care
all these things are weighting me down
for a reason or another people want me to share
i've been running away for so damn long
oh god please help me
now i realize i'm weak never the less that strong
i find it hard to love someone else
because its hard loving myself
i'm not trying to push away
because i would love hardly if my clouds weren't full of gray
mommy listen to me good
you have brought me down so much
i can't remember the last time i hug you and felt your touch
its like a shadow repeating itself on my wall
oh God help me before i fall
daddy i tried to love hard as i could
but i gave up just like in any sport like i always would
sorry for the pain i caused
i loved so many people but in a time of my own i had just got lost
a Angel once but her hands on my shoulder, but Jesus i can feel the pain more as i get older
struggling day by day
are any clear clouds out by my way
been used for so much
money, sex, cars and any other golds i touch
i have lost so many friends
i realize most were there for to pretend
let me sleep while i'm wide awake
please tell is this a dream
when i was young i never picture at all this seen
falling apart like a broken glass
drinks by drink and i'm not ready to pass
but God if you hear me, please tell who going to save me while i'm wide awake
tell me who's going to be there
tell me who is going to care
am i alone on this throne
i'm crying out to you
Lord, i'm crying out for you
crying, crying, crying out for you
please wash this pain
away
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Away

Contributed by seci on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:38:52 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



listening to that same sad song
my radio seems to skip
pills from trying to overdose lies here beneath my feet
drinking until the moon shines it glare in to my window
i'm scaring myself half to death because i never can here my heart beat
tears roll down my face
please tell me do you care
all these things are weighting me down
for a reason or another people want me to share
i've been running away for so damn long
oh god please help me
now i realize i'm weak never the less that strong
i find it hard to love someone else
because its hard loving myself
i'm not trying to push away
because i would love hardly if my clouds weren't full of gray
mommy listen to me good
you have brought me down so much
i can't remember the last time i hug you and felt your touch
its like a shadow repeating itself on my wall
oh God help me before i fall
daddy i tried to love hard as i could
but i gave up just like in any sport like i always would
sorry for the pain i caused
i loved so many people but in a time of my own i had just got lost
a Angel once but her hands on my shoulder, but Jesus i can feel the pain more as i get older
struggling day by day
are any clear clouds out by my way
been used for so much
money, sex, cars and any other golds i touch
i have lost so many friends
i realize most were there for to pretend
let me sleep while i'm wide awake
please tell is this a dream
when i was young i never picture at all this seen
falling apart like a broken glass
drinks by drink and i'm not ready to pass
but God if you hear me, please tell who going to save me while i'm wide awake
tell me who's going to be there
tell me who is going to care
am i alone on this throne
i'm crying out to you
Lord, i'm crying out for you
crying, crying, crying out for you
please wash this pain
away




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Re: Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Influence on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 03:14:25 PM AEST
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nice


Re: Away (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 10:52:26 PM AEST
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Excellent poem, very strong, keep your head up tho things are bound to get better.
God Bless

Jenni xxoo




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