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High above the dotted illuminated
Street Lamps that line the city blocks.
It is a Peaceful night
Of slumbered dreams.

Dreams and desires
From deep within
Come comforting your melancholy soul .
Where time, and weather
matter not And you are in control .
To call forth both past and present
Happiness
Joy or Bliss

Remembered mystical visions
Awakening those feelings inside
Imigine yourself there
Gently kneeling, kissing
and Caressing

Only to open your eyes to empty air
Alone so totally Alone
Having no one there .

Sadly and disappointed
Rolling back over ,
pulling the covers tight around
Trying to call back the dream
that seemed so real .

Whisper
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Dream

Contributed by Whisper on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 02:08:02 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Dark nights are cloaked with their starry light
High above the dotted illuminated
Street Lamps that line the city blocks.
It is a Peaceful night
Of slumbered dreams.

Dreams and desires
From deep within
Come comforting your melancholy soul .
Where time, and weather
matter not And you are in control .
To call forth both past and present
Happiness
Joy or Bliss

Remembered mystical visions
Awakening those feelings inside
Imigine yourself there
Gently kneeling, kissing
and Caressing

Only to open your eyes to empty air
Alone so totally Alone
Having no one there .

Sadly and disappointed
Rolling back over ,
pulling the covers tight around
Trying to call back the dream
that seemed so real .

Whisper

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Re: Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 03:51:49 AM AEST
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It's the same everynight. I dream such magical dreams until I open my eyes and realize it's all but a dream. I know this feeling oh so well. You close ur eyes and try to relive the dream again.
A fantastic write. Captivating from start to finish. So many of us out there can relate to ur poem. Well done on producing a wonderful write.
*hugs*
sue

Re: Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by EverlastingDawn on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 05:57:24 AM AEST
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I really liked the poem
It's bittersweet in a way
Nice imagery
Good Write

~Dawn

Re: Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 06:35:57 AM AEST
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A very nice write! Great imagery and wow how I can relate to wanting to go back to sleep and recall a nice dream.

Really good.

Thank you for sharing and take care.

Tim
:-)

Re: Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by enigma on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 08:13:05 AM AEST
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...why did you have to write this so nicely...it was too easy climbing into it with my p.j.'s on, pulling the down comforter over my head...waking up can be such a b....!

...very disappointing...but, then, that means your poem was very successful!

...thanks for creating it...

ron...enigma

Re: Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 11:13:39 AM AEST
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your words are so enchanting just like that sort of dream....

Re: Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 11:29:03 AM AEST
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Ahhh yes...we can all relate to this one in some form or another! This seems like a very personal, and emotive spill...
I hope things get better for you. Nice job with this write. Keep it up!

Scorp.

Re: Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 02:32:49 PM AEST
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A realy beautiful peice of writting u capture all the reminance of a twilight love very dreamy and touching this was 2 read.

Ben

Re: Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 01:46:22 PM AEST
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hmm
delicious flow
well done.....

Re: Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 01:01:48 PM AEST
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Wow wonderful write. Like everyone else I too canremember times of trying to return to a wonderful dream but never making it. Keep up the great job.
-Jen

Re: Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by EvaLastingRose on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 12:02:04 PM AEST
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this poem takes me somewhere i love it so conforting to read, i love ur word choices too
>carlee

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