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I'm in your past but can't leave you behind
I always knew my life would end when you leave
And now that you're gone, I don't want to breathe

And skyward glances at night are all dark
The lights have all faded, I can't find the stars
And with their departure, my hope's left the earth
Should I call you for comfort, things only get worse

So now I just sit here in darkness alone
The temperature dropping, my body feels cold
My emotions are drained and my energy's gone
I don't have the strength and don't want to go on [comments] => 5 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 22 [informant] => b_rand [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 29 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Painful Air

Contributed by b_rand on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:27:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Baby, you're gone but you're still on my mind
I'm in your past but can't leave you behind
I always knew my life would end when you leave
And now that you're gone, I don't want to breathe

And skyward glances at night are all dark
The lights have all faded, I can't find the stars
And with their departure, my hope's left the earth
Should I call you for comfort, things only get worse

So now I just sit here in darkness alone
The temperature dropping, my body feels cold
My emotions are drained and my energy's gone
I don't have the strength and don't want to go on

Copyright © b_rand ... [ 2005-11-16 00:27:44]
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Re: Painful Air (User Rating: 1 )
by OzChick on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:53:26 AM AEST
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This is very expressive and despairing. Good write. I'm sorry you just got dumped but maybe you are better off with out this person. All things happen for a reason, I believe that anyway. Blessed be.

Re: Painful Air (User Rating: 1 )
by Kaiba on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:08:32 AM AEST
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I feel your pain... Im sorry. Good but depressing read.

Re: Painful Air (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:59:10 AM AEST
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its never nice to be dummped

i know the feelign to well

its a really good read

and a great write

Re: Painful Air (User Rating: 1 )
by eternal_sorrows on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 11:19:40 PM AEST
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Excellent display of emotions written here. I know this feeling too and I hope your on your feet and breathing again soon.

ES

Re: Painful Air (User Rating: 1 )
by deathbringer on Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 10:10:16 PM AEST
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I know this feeling too well.I know it burns and it hurts like hell but the sun will shine for you again.good poem.A bit depressive but enjoyable read.good work.

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