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Array ( [sid] => 109823 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Im Sic [time] => 2005-11-15 22:37:14 [hometext] => This poem was done while at a very low point in my life but im very proud of its true meaning. [bodytext] => This world which sleeps in pools of its own hypocracy, spewed from the mouths of the over opionated on matters unknown.
All the while, mankind continues its never ending slaughter of life, liberty, and the persuit of common sense.
But on the the day of judgement all those who stand quivering before it with fear will soon find a pleased Lucifer greeting them to eternal damnation.
I will enjoy the sight of those thought to be holy wandering aimlessly through the bowels of the underworld asking themselves questions to only have themselves answer them ignorantly.
Replying with self dilluted premonitions in an attempt to relieve the thought of the obvious outcome.
Still i will trudge with the millions barefooted over the broken glass of reality for all eternity.
Pick your path, travel, and do so as long as allowed and remember our graves are already dug and self pity will hardly do you justice.
Life as you percieve it will cease to exsist and you'll lie all alone dreaming of the past, leading to your eventual insanity and will be forever forgotten in the useless history books of our peers. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 247 [topic] => 43 [informant] => LovesJester45 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Im Sic

Contributed by LovesJester45 on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 10:37:14 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



This world which sleeps in pools of its own hypocracy, spewed from the mouths of the over opionated on matters unknown.
All the while, mankind continues its never ending slaughter of life, liberty, and the persuit of common sense.
But on the the day of judgement all those who stand quivering before it with fear will soon find a pleased Lucifer greeting them to eternal damnation.
I will enjoy the sight of those thought to be holy wandering aimlessly through the bowels of the underworld asking themselves questions to only have themselves answer them ignorantly.
Replying with self dilluted premonitions in an attempt to relieve the thought of the obvious outcome.
Still i will trudge with the millions barefooted over the broken glass of reality for all eternity.
Pick your path, travel, and do so as long as allowed and remember our graves are already dug and self pity will hardly do you justice.
Life as you percieve it will cease to exsist and you'll lie all alone dreaming of the past, leading to your eventual insanity and will be forever forgotten in the useless history books of our peers.




Copyright © LovesJester45 ... [ 2005-11-15 22:37:14]
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Re: Im Sic (User Rating: 1 )
by midnightwriter on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 10:47:18 PM AEST
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Thats a pretty profound write, I actually had to read it twice before I fully understood. Very true, and quite a wonderful write!


Re: Im Sic (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 11:26:51 PM AEST
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SO TRUE!! GREAT WRITE ON THIS POEM!




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