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he doesnt belive i lived quiet right
waving his book you know the one with all that
even if i think most of its crap
yes the word is true but mans had it to long
i am sure the changed the story all wrong
it could have been adam who picked the tree
and blamed eve that fact i can see
what about lust even looking is denied
if its a sin why do we have eyes
if jesus was a wine bibbler and its alright
as long as your not drunk every night
or use the plants that grow on the land
even thou its illegal by man
who says its not right in the mind of i am
with all these chatolic fables divised by them
until that day i face judgement high
i will live each day until i die [comments] => 4 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

lies of man who devised their plan

Contributed by lostrelic on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 09:02:26 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

dancing on my tomb is a suit in white
he doesnt belive i lived quiet right
waving his book you know the one with all that
even if i think most of its crap
yes the word is true but mans had it to long
i am sure the changed the story all wrong
it could have been adam who picked the tree
and blamed eve that fact i can see
what about lust even looking is denied
if its a sin why do we have eyes
if jesus was a wine bibbler and its alright
as long as your not drunk every night
or use the plants that grow on the land
even thou its illegal by man
who says its not right in the mind of i am
with all these chatolic fables divised by them
until that day i face judgement high
i will live each day until i die

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2005-11-15 21:02:26]
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Re: lies of man who devised their plan (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 09:10:49 PM AEST
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believed, ............too many try and say.......you drink, you sin.....you go out your commiting........The way I look at it, if you want to do, then do.......we all have our "own" life and turn. ! Dont make anyone do what they DONT want to do........each to their own.! Cant be perfect, nor make everyone HAPPY>! Liked this..........

Brew~

Re: lies of man who devised their plan (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:02:43 AM AEST
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i must say this was very good to read. very good points being made and expressed well. if the bible is all that and more why then have missing books from it. why then take a book from it in the 19th century. why edit it at all with countless religions each with their own version. i like your style.

Re: lies of man who devised their plan (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:27:01 AM AEST
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Very big deep write!
Awesomely written.
Big huggs,
emy

Re: lies of man who devised their plan (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 07:11:36 AM AEST
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Very, very thought provoking. You are a man of my thoughts indeed. Hung on every word. Loved every line. Yep, don't look now; you don't want to sin by thought.

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