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Array ( [sid] => 109803 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => More then a friend [time] => 2005-11-15 18:49:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You make me speechless
Your voice melts my heart
Your look drives me crazy
Your touch intoxicates me
Your personality is so perfect
You don't know what you have
You don't know, you could get anyone you want
You could have the best
You could have me
You don't want me
You want someone else
You want him not me
You're destroying me
You may not know it but you are
Your not trying but you are
You try to help but it can't be helped
Your beauty
Your personality
You
You pull me towards you then push me away

I can talk to you about any thing
I think about you all day
I think about you when we wake up
I think about you when
I go to sleep
I think about you in my dreams
I could treat you like a goddess
I could be the one you want
I could be your everything
I just need a chance
I just need you
You, my first love
You, my only love
I want to see your beauty
I want to feel your touch
I want your voice to melt my heart
I just want to me more then a friend
I want to be more
I want you You want him
You need to give me a chance
You will get all you need with me
I just need a chance to be more then a friend
Your choice, will you give me the chance? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Kaiba [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
More then a friend

Contributed by Kaiba on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 06:49:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You make me speechless
Your voice melts my heart
Your look drives me crazy
Your touch intoxicates me
Your personality is so perfect
You don't know what you have
You don't know, you could get anyone you want
You could have the best
You could have me
You don't want me
You want someone else
You want him not me
You're destroying me
You may not know it but you are
Your not trying but you are
You try to help but it can't be helped
Your beauty
Your personality
You
You pull me towards you then push me away

I can talk to you about any thing
I think about you all day
I think about you when we wake up
I think about you when
I go to sleep
I think about you in my dreams
I could treat you like a goddess
I could be the one you want
I could be your everything
I just need a chance
I just need you
You, my first love
You, my only love
I want to see your beauty
I want to feel your touch
I want your voice to melt my heart
I just want to me more then a friend
I want to be more
I want you You want him
You need to give me a chance
You will get all you need with me
I just need a chance to be more then a friend
Your choice, will you give me the chance?




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Re: More then a friend (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamPoetess on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 08:18:48 PM AEST
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I can sense your need for this person, this friend, I trust you can be all to that person, the answer lies in hope yes, it is never advisable to try to push someone toward you, perhaps that friend comes near to you because you have a wonderful halo, and it makes them feel better, just try to be a friend and if it works into a deeper relationship, you know you worked it right by allowing them to choose, sometimes yes, they must choose, and that is your chance in life, be well my friend, wonderful write, full of deep compassion, someone will notice your beautiful nature, hang in there, may not be the one you dream of, maybe a better dream is waiting for you, then they may be allowing you to make the choice

Meagan


Re: More then a friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 11:12:29 PM AEST
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I agree with DreamPoetess, a very deep write full of compassions, listen to her, she is very wise, and choices are hard to make, but be there and all will work out, and maybe your dream, or a better dream will come true. Another Amazing write my friend.




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