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[title] => I Carry my Paintbrush With Me
[time] => 2005-11-14 13:04:10
[hometext] => This is how I really feel in the form of a poem. It's basicly talking to my friend Matt, because I try to change myself so I don't lose our freindship.
[bodytext] => I keep my paintbrush with me, wherever I may go, in case I need to cover up, so the real me doesn't show. I'm so afraid to show me to you, afraid of what you'll do, that you might laugh or say mean things, I'm afraid I might lose you. I'd like to remove all of my paint coats, to show you the real, true me, but I want you to try and understand, I need you to accept what you see. Now my coats are all stripped off, I feel naked, bare and cold, and if you still love me with all that you see, you're my friend pure as gold.
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I Carry my Paintbrush With Me
Contributed by
nimmy_surface
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Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 01:04:10 PM in AEST
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toughstuff
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I keep my paintbrush with me, wherever I may go, in case I need to cover up, so the real me doesn't show. I'm so afraid to show me to you, afraid of what you'll do, that you might laugh or say mean things, I'm afraid I might lose you. I'd like to remove all of my paint coats, to show you the real, true me, but I want you to try and understand, I need you to accept what you see. Now my coats are all stripped off, I feel naked, bare and cold, and if you still love me with all that you see, you're my friend pure as gold.
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Re: I Carry my Paintbrush With Me
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 02:22:40 PM AEST
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| i'm suprised no has commented on this yet, i know how it feels to have a need to cover up a past, afraid of what others might think, you expressed the feeling very well here. Great job. |
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Re: I Carry my Paintbrush With Me
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 05:59:38 PM AEST
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great write, chels... but you shouldn't cover up your true self. if people don't like you for who you are, that's their problem. but great write, keep up the good work!!
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