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Array ( [sid] => 109703 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Angels For You [time] => 2005-11-14 12:44:56 [hometext] => by Andrew L. Crigger [bodytext] => Plunge from the light.
My love is proven true.
Ive fallen into enternity.
This angel's for you.

The home I find.
Its deep in your heart.
The heavens become jealous.
They tear me apart.

But here I am crawling.
Right back to your arms,
so divine.
You shelter me from the rain.
For you the stars align.

His words bleed me dry.
My wings he takes away.
Yet I come back to you.
And love sends my mind astray.

Ive fallen from the light.
I did it all just for you.
This love is my great sin.
Theres nothing I wouldnt do.

My worship no longer his.
And this battered heart is true.
Even though he casts me away.
This fallen angels for you.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 2 [informant] => de5tructo [notes] => Edited as requested in 'Site help' - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

This Angels For You

Contributed by de5tructo on Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 12:44:56 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Plunge from the light.
My love is proven true.
Ive fallen into enternity.
This angel's for you.

The home I find.
Its deep in your heart.
The heavens become jealous.
They tear me apart.

But here I am crawling.
Right back to your arms,
so divine.
You shelter me from the rain.
For you the stars align.

His words bleed me dry.
My wings he takes away.
Yet I come back to you.
And love sends my mind astray.

Ive fallen from the light.
I did it all just for you.
This love is my great sin.
Theres nothing I wouldnt do.

My worship no longer his.
And this battered heart is true.
Even though he casts me away.
This fallen angels for you.

Copyright © de5tructo ... [ 2005-11-14 12:44:56]
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Re: This Angels For You (User Rating: 1 )
by de5tructo on Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 02:19:23 PM AEST
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Im sorry about the error in the first line of paragraph one. Instead of "This is angels for you" it should say "This angels for you". The moderators will correct this error shortly....

Thanks and sorry again,
DE5TRUCTO

Re: This Angels For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 03:22:27 PM AEST
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WoW an absolutely sensational write. You have the reader captivated from start to finish.

Ive fallen from the light.
I did it all just for you.
This love is my great sin.
Theres nothing I wouldnt do.

I love this verse it's my fav. one. Well done on producing such a great write. Keep penning.
*hugs*
sue

Re: This Angels For You (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 02:12:54 AM AEST
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Overall, this is a good piece, clearly written from the heart, and backed by real emotion. It was a little choppy here and there, and it sort of had a raw, uncut feel to it, but that was part of its charm. Nice job! Keep up the writes, and welcome to YPDC : )

Scorp.

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