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Array ( [sid] => 109680 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crazy Thoughts [time] => 2005-11-13 23:57:24 [hometext] => i couldnt sleep, so i wrote a poem about it [bodytext] => What crazy thoughts run through my head
When at night I lie restlessly in my bed
Trying to come up with spectacular thoughts
To share with the world my comforts and distraughts
About people in far away places and lands
Whos languages I cant even understand
But still I think about them and many others too
Is everything people told me today really true?
Or in a way is my life a giant deception
Is the way I see things the overall perception?
You may ask who gave me the right to think like this
With my thoughts disorganized and amiss
But I can keep track of them no matter if you can
And its better to be like me, then completely misunderstand.... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 43 [informant] => The_Callif [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Crazy Thoughts

Contributed by The_Callif on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 11:57:24 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

What crazy thoughts run through my head
When at night I lie restlessly in my bed
Trying to come up with spectacular thoughts
To share with the world my comforts and distraughts
About people in far away places and lands
Whos languages I cant even understand
But still I think about them and many others too
Is everything people told me today really true?
Or in a way is my life a giant deception
Is the way I see things the overall perception?
You may ask who gave me the right to think like this
With my thoughts disorganized and amiss
But I can keep track of them no matter if you can
And its better to be like me, then completely misunderstand....

Copyright © The_Callif ... [ 2005-11-13 23:57:24]
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Re: Crazy Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by Itsme7 on Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 12:11:49 AM AEST
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I have to agree with u whole heartedly. If more people thought like us the world would be a better place.

Re: Crazy Thoughts (User Rating: 1 )
by the_story_of_the_year on Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 01:24:01 AM AEST
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some of my best thinking is done while just lying in bed as well. good write.

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