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Array ( [sid] => 109637 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the underlying beauty [time] => 2005-11-13 11:33:50 [hometext] => love is patient. [bodytext] =>
"Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it."
-Confucius


:::facts:::

life is beautiful.

trees are beautiful.

the last breath is beautiful.

love is beautiful.

eyes are beautiful.

hands are beautiful.

hugs are beautiful.

music is beautiful.



:::problems::::

life in every case, is lost.

a tree is beautiful, and crucial.....
it can also be skribbled on, crumpled up,
and thrown in the waste basket in
a 2nd grade classroom.

the good with the bad, its a moment of
getting an answer to the most asked question ever..
but its the end of an unmatched expiriance.

love will make you do crazy things.
love will make you not eat....
love will make you lose focus.....
love will make you overly sensitive...
love will make you jealous...
love will make you insecure....
love is my favorite emotion.

eyes see all of the things that are wrong with anything
that can have something wrong with it.

hands create weapons.....
weapons create death...
death creates less space in large fields.

hugs can be too tight.
a hug can mean goodbye.
goodbye will kill your soul.

music brings you down....
it brings you up....
in essance it causes you
to be unbalanced.

everything has its bad side.

maybe its not as much we dont see the beauty.......
most of the time we dont see the bad side......

















the beauty get taken for granted.... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 61 [informant] => kevinsalisbury [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
the underlying beauty

Contributed by kevinsalisbury on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 11:33:50 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles




"Everything has its beauty but not everyone sees it."
-Confucius


:::facts:::

life is beautiful.

trees are beautiful.

the last breath is beautiful.

love is beautiful.

eyes are beautiful.

hands are beautiful.

hugs are beautiful.

music is beautiful.



:::problems::::

life in every case, is lost.

a tree is beautiful, and crucial.....
it can also be skribbled on, crumpled up,
and thrown in the waste basket in
a 2nd grade classroom.

the good with the bad, its a moment of
getting an answer to the most asked question ever..
but its the end of an unmatched expiriance.

love will make you do crazy things.
love will make you not eat....
love will make you lose focus.....
love will make you overly sensitive...
love will make you jealous...
love will make you insecure....
love is my favorite emotion.

eyes see all of the things that are wrong with anything
that can have something wrong with it.

hands create weapons.....
weapons create death...
death creates less space in large fields.

hugs can be too tight.
a hug can mean goodbye.
goodbye will kill your soul.

music brings you down....
it brings you up....
in essance it causes you
to be unbalanced.

everything has its bad side.

maybe its not as much we dont see the beauty.......
most of the time we dont see the bad side......

















the beauty get taken for granted....




Copyright © kevinsalisbury ... [ 2005-11-13 11:33:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: the underlying beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by sararose1950 on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 12:27:29 PM AEST
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interesting write- good and bad in all things- balance of both is essential- a rollercoaster that just runs in a flat circle would be very boring. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.


Re: the underlying beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by enigma on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 02:12:26 PM AEST
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...an infinite topic...as my life philosophy has evolved, all distills down to Truth and Wisdom...when Truth and Wisdom achieve a dynamic balance, sort of like melody and harmony, Beauty is...Love is the perfect blending of the three...

...I haven't reached the point where the concepts of good and bad don't exist, but I do believe man has a fairly finite perception of them...my limited understanding has come to understand that fractals are mathematical patterns that repeat in larger and larger and larger patterns...the small ones are simply part of the larger ones...in this sense, we have difficulty seeing the total picture...we understand that when a fox eats a rabbit, from a pure philosophical perspective, it is beautiful...the rabbit would argue the point and when the great horned owl snaps up one of the fox's kits, the apple loses its shine, too...'bad' choices have within them the potential for 'good,' that would be pain and misery...one would quickly say that pain and misery are 'bad,' and yet it is these that will drive a person to make a healthier choice...and these are the words that I find myself using more these day...healthy and unhealthy...wholesome and unwholesome...

...your poem trigger some thought...

...thanks, and keep 'chewing...'

ron...enigma




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