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Array ( [sid] => 109618 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost Within [time] => 2005-11-13 00:03:10 [hometext] => Just a rough draft, tell me about anything I need to work on thanks [bodytext] => It’s all wary,
Memories,
Me,
You.

I can’t focus,
You,
Me,
Alone.

I can’t find,
Me,
You,
The light.

I’ve fallen,
Away from you,
Away from me,
Lost in eternity.

I’ve lost,
You,
Me,
Alone.

I’ve once loved,
A passionate love,
That’s turned to hate,
A menacing hate.

I’m lost inside myself,
No where to turn,
The only thing I can find,
Are the dead ends.

I’m lost within,
Fallen from love,
I can’t find myself,
I can’t stop hating me.

I’ve forgotten,
Your presence,
Your face,
Your memory.

I’m lost within myself,
No heart to find the way,
I can’t help but hate myself,
For losing you. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Mild_Tempest [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Lost Within

Contributed by Mild_Tempest on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 12:03:10 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

It’s all wary,
Memories,
Me,
You.

I can’t focus,
You,
Me,
Alone.

I can’t find,
Me,
You,
The light.

I’ve fallen,
Away from you,
Away from me,
Lost in eternity.

I’ve lost,
You,
Me,
Alone.

I’ve once loved,
A passionate love,
That’s turned to hate,
A menacing hate.

I’m lost inside myself,
No where to turn,
The only thing I can find,
Are the dead ends.

I’m lost within,
Fallen from love,
I can’t find myself,
I can’t stop hating me.

I’ve forgotten,
Your presence,
Your face,
Your memory.

I’m lost within myself,
No heart to find the way,
I can’t help but hate myself,
For losing you.

Copyright Â© Mild_Tempest ... [ 2005-11-13 00:03:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lost Within (User Rating: 1 )
by spazie on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 12:38:57 AM AEST
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very well written

Re: Lost Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Alibi on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 02:48:37 AM AEST
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Very well written, and in a style your own too. I like this poem! Good use of expression, and that last line sticks in the readers mind. Good poem!

Re: Lost Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 08:23:22 AM AEST
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this is facinating i love the prelude to the actual poem it sneaks up on you very provacaitive indeed the straight fowardness and unsettling way you display your hurt, very
well written and revealing in it's emotional
effect it had on me while i was reading it.

Ben

Re: Lost Within (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 06:18:17 PM AEST
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Very well written...I could feel your pain...
God Bless!

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