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Array ( [sid] => 109604 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicidal Thoughts ( they're so confusing ) [time] => 2005-11-12 18:28:52 [hometext] => This is just a little poem I wrote because Ive had thoughts of suicide, but I wont do it so,,, you have nothing to worry about! Its about me not wanting to commit suicide but having chances of doing it one day if I get out of line or really upset! [bodytext] => Sometimes, I walk around my house thinking, should I do it,
My mind keeps telling me to do it,
But, my heart keeps telling me no,

Its so confusing,
How am I supposed to live,
With all my surroundings,
All tangled and knotted,
What am I supposed to do?

Ooh, what should I do? x2

My heart is keeping me from ending it alllllllllll,
But my mind puts up a good fight,
Im scared my mind will win,,,
One day, when Iam alone,

Thats the ultimate fear of mine,
I dont want to end my life! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 636 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Mikayla [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Suicidal Thoughts ( they're so confusing )

Contributed by Mikayla on Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 06:28:52 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Sometimes, I walk around my house thinking, should I do it,
My mind keeps telling me to do it,
But, my heart keeps telling me no,

Its so confusing,
How am I supposed to live,
With all my surroundings,
All tangled and knotted,
What am I supposed to do?

Ooh, what should I do? x2

My heart is keeping me from ending it alllllllllll,
But my mind puts up a good fight,
Im scared my mind will win,,,
One day, when Iam alone,

Thats the ultimate fear of mine,
I dont want to end my life!

Copyright © Mikayla ... [ 2005-11-12 18:28:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Suicidal Thoughts ( they're so confusing ) (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 06:34:12 PM AEST
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this is well put.
i too have had thoughts of siucide
and if youve read my poems
you know that i have almost given in to it in the past

Re: Suicidal Thoughts ( they're so confusing ) (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 06:42:52 PM AEST
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too true. i dont think i know anyone who hasnt
had thoughts of sucide at one point, hopefully
no one will give into these urges. Sucide is a
terrible thing, a word used far too lightly in
society today. well written poem

diz

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