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Array ( [sid] => 109591 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My soul is burning for you. [time] => 2005-11-12 15:56:48 [hometext] => Just somthing that I did last night I am new and wanted to know what you all thought. [bodytext] => When you look into my eyes
Can you see all the pain and the hurt
That boils beneath the glassy surface,
And can you see that my soul is burning for you.

You are touching the flawless perfection
That is a reflection of the self that I could never be
A happy smiling, non-apologetic person
And all this is hiding behind the glassy surface
Of ice blue eyes, starring back at you
As you see into me and watch that my soul is burning for you.

You smile ever so softly
You look into my eyes and watch the glassy surface
Crumble under your gaze,
You are watching the perfect shield fail
You are the cause
And all you do is stand there and stare
As you can see into me and watch that my soul is burning for you.

I watch you and your flawless perfection,
Starring back at me your eyes hold the hope and dreams of a thousand past lives
Your smile shines threw my shield
As I stare back I can watch my world fall apart around me
And I do not care as you can see that my soul burns for you.

All there is now is you, and a shattered and broken me
You are my missing peaces,
With out you I will surly fade into nothingness
Lost forever in myself,
Doomed to forever walk alone in my darkness
A shattered man in a shattered world of himself
Now threw his own eyes he can see his soul
And see that it is burning for you.

A single tear rolls down his face as he looks back at you
Helpless and weak,
There he stands before you, expecting to die
Yet there is no pain, no hurt
Only the fact that his soul is burning, burning for you
Burning for your kiss
And your love, your flawless soul would hold up his world.

And yet all he can do is kneel before you
Kneel and stare up to you, tears rolling down his face
As he cries for help with no words,
You understand his pain and he does not know how
He can not feel anymore, yet you make him
He can not cry and still he cries for you
He wishes for nothing, but still he longs for you

Now from your eyes he sees that his soul is perfect
No world is falling apart, no man left to die
There is only him and you,
In a perfect world all our own
No need for hurt nor for pain
All that he sees threw your eyes is himself
And threw his all he can see is you
Now it is clear.

He knows why his soul burns
He can see why he hurts, and why he holds so much pain.
He was missing something, no someone
He was missing you, and your perfect love.
And now his soul it burns only for you.
But not in pain, only as a light
To show you the way back to him
If you ever get lost, in yourself or in him
It will always be there like the love that you share.

And forever these words will be burning
Sitting there on his soul and his heart
In his head and in his hands
Forever I am your teddy bear,
And forever I am him.

By: Tyron Cazes.
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My soul is burning for you.

Contributed by Dorrian_Malcavalia on Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 03:56:48 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



When you look into my eyes
Can you see all the pain and the hurt
That boils beneath the glassy surface,
And can you see that my soul is burning for you.

You are touching the flawless perfection
That is a reflection of the self that I could never be
A happy smiling, non-apologetic person
And all this is hiding behind the glassy surface
Of ice blue eyes, starring back at you
As you see into me and watch that my soul is burning for you.

You smile ever so softly
You look into my eyes and watch the glassy surface
Crumble under your gaze,
You are watching the perfect shield fail
You are the cause
And all you do is stand there and stare
As you can see into me and watch that my soul is burning for you.

I watch you and your flawless perfection,
Starring back at me your eyes hold the hope and dreams of a thousand past lives
Your smile shines threw my shield
As I stare back I can watch my world fall apart around me
And I do not care as you can see that my soul burns for you.

All there is now is you, and a shattered and broken me
You are my missing peaces,
With out you I will surly fade into nothingness
Lost forever in myself,
Doomed to forever walk alone in my darkness
A shattered man in a shattered world of himself
Now threw his own eyes he can see his soul
And see that it is burning for you.

A single tear rolls down his face as he looks back at you
Helpless and weak,
There he stands before you, expecting to die
Yet there is no pain, no hurt
Only the fact that his soul is burning, burning for you
Burning for your kiss
And your love, your flawless soul would hold up his world.

And yet all he can do is kneel before you
Kneel and stare up to you, tears rolling down his face
As he cries for help with no words,
You understand his pain and he does not know how
He can not feel anymore, yet you make him
He can not cry and still he cries for you
He wishes for nothing, but still he longs for you

Now from your eyes he sees that his soul is perfect
No world is falling apart, no man left to die
There is only him and you,
In a perfect world all our own
No need for hurt nor for pain
All that he sees threw your eyes is himself
And threw his all he can see is you
Now it is clear.

He knows why his soul burns
He can see why he hurts, and why he holds so much pain.
He was missing something, no someone
He was missing you, and your perfect love.
And now his soul it burns only for you.
But not in pain, only as a light
To show you the way back to him
If you ever get lost, in yourself or in him
It will always be there like the love that you share.

And forever these words will be burning
Sitting there on his soul and his heart
In his head and in his hands
Forever I am your teddy bear,
And forever I am him.

By: Tyron Cazes.




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Re: My soul is burning for you. (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 04:22:26 PM AEST
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Sounds intense. Good for you, hope it's the real thing. This poem was pretty good. It came across as an emotional outpour-type write. Very in-the-moment and honest. I spotted a of couple typos, so you may want to check your work over next time before you post, or click 'yes' to the moderators checking your spelling...Other than that, it was an enjoyable read.
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