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Array ( [sid] => 109572 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In the End [time] => 2005-11-12 02:19:00 [hometext] => i don't like this whole "just friends" thing, but she has to be in my life one way or the other, comments always appreciated :) [bodytext] => There's no reason to be afraid,
I'm not here to hurt you.
I can't ignore the bond we've made,
but still I can't believe what we've turned into.

Things shouldn't be like this,
but it is the way they are.
A strong connection still exists,
so i wish for you whenever I see a shooting star.

I hope that one day you will see,
that what we share is great.
But until then friends we'll be,
because in the end you'll be worth the wait.
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In the End

Contributed by curtisc on Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 02:19:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

There's no reason to be afraid,
I'm not here to hurt you.
I can't ignore the bond we've made,
but still I can't believe what we've turned into.

Things shouldn't be like this,
but it is the way they are.
A strong connection still exists,
so i wish for you whenever I see a shooting star.

I hope that one day you will see,
that what we share is great.
But until then friends we'll be,
because in the end you'll be worth the wait.

Copyright © curtisc ... [ 2005-11-12 02:19:00]
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Re: In the End (User Rating: 1 )
by Hollow_Eyed_Girl on Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 02:53:56 AM AEST
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wow..u totally described what im going through right now..
haha and i thought i was the only one who went through this kind of stuff...
very nice..i love how its worded..

Re: In the End (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Influence on Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 02:58:55 PM AEST
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I like this, nice work

Re: In the End (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 07:34:30 PM AEST
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How very pretty. I hope it works out for you in the end...The flow of this was good, it stumbled a bit in that final line of the second stanza...but your expression was sweet, and seemingly heartfelt. Nicely done.

Scorp.

Re: In the End (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 10:47:02 PM AEST
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hmmm...this was a nice write, but i don't think it's one of ur best, but it's good to see u started writing again. Maybe i'm not crazy bout this poem cuz i'm biased...don't like the idea that ur still "waiting" for her! Tanya

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