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Array ( [sid] => 109561 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You will see [time] => 2005-11-11 22:13:14 [hometext] => Hi thanks for reading, comments would be great.. GODBLESS ALL [bodytext] => The pain you bring upon my life is unbearable.
You think you can just act like you would even care to befriend me, just because you felt guilt?

I cant take it anymore.
The fear of being betrayed again is not a risk im willing to take.

What kind of person are you?
What kind of person would lie to someones face?
- Dont you know how much it hurts?
Hmmmmmm, i suppose not.

Im going to show you....I want you to live through the abuse and the horrible thoughts
that had consumed my entire mind and body.
It doesnt feel good.
How strong do you think that I am?
Do you think it feels good or something, knowing that you can ruin someones life just
because you... you...you feel like it?
I want you to pay
You cant just ruin peoples lives.
You will see.
You know.... I dont think that you could handle it, the pain that has been in my life.
You wouldnt last. Just as I, the pain becomes to deep, till there is nothing left inside.
Nothing else to do. No where else to go.
You will see, then we will see how you like it.
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You will see

Contributed by BEBE on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 10:13:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The pain you bring upon my life is unbearable.
You think you can just act like you would even care to befriend me, just because you felt guilt?

I cant take it anymore.
The fear of being betrayed again is not a risk im willing to take.

What kind of person are you?
What kind of person would lie to someones face?
- Dont you know how much it hurts?
Hmmmmmm, i suppose not.

Im going to show you....I want you to live through the abuse and the horrible thoughts
that had consumed my entire mind and body.
It doesnt feel good.
How strong do you think that I am?
Do you think it feels good or something, knowing that you can ruin someones life just
because you... you...you feel like it?
I want you to pay
You cant just ruin peoples lives.
You will see.
You know.... I dont think that you could handle it, the pain that has been in my life.
You wouldnt last. Just as I, the pain becomes to deep, till there is nothing left inside.
Nothing else to do. No where else to go.
You will see, then we will see how you like it.

Copyright © BEBE ... [ 2005-11-11 22:13:14]
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Re: You will see (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 10:59:14 PM AEST
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A deep, painful and emotional write. You can feel ur pain through ur words. You've been through alot. May u see brighter days ahead.
A very well expressed write. Thanks for sharing it.
*hugs*
sue

Re: You will see (User Rating: 1 )
by Artemis03 on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 11:05:45 PM AEST
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Oh my go0dness... I feel you pain. I know my pain. So I realize why you feel this way. I don't know what was going through the person's mind who hurt you. But in the long run... what goes around comes around... it's karma baby... THEY WILL PAY !

Re: You will see (User Rating: 1 )
by Lin54 on Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 01:40:46 PM AEST
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I had deep rooted hurts like that and yes still do at times. I've found that when no one else will listen--especially the one who inflicted the hurt--then I cry out to the Lord--I cry and I cry--though no one sees the tears and finally I feel the peace that God brings. I'm glad He is my friend through it all!

Great feeling poem!!!

Thanks for sharing!

Linda (Lin54)

Re: You will see (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 10:46:33 AM AEST
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Oh you cannot imagine dear Bebe how deeply I emphasize with this your beautiful poem.
Experience is everything and can not be rivalled :) :) Can it :) :)
Also your "Dance unto the KLord is a delightfuln logo!
I wrote myself a Tetractic on "The Lord of the Dance"
Your Logo is a true godsend d in an hour of heaviness.
"Dance unto the Lord"
Thanks for sharihg Bebe (I called my departed husband "Bebe" as a nickname. her "Stephie-boy, but mostly "Bebe"."Bebe-Dandy"
Quite a delightful co-incidence.
Blessings Bebe!
Elizabeth

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