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Array ( [sid] => 10954 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => THE BEAUTIFUL [time] => 2003-01-22 15:40:00 [hometext] => Do Not Comment To This. This is the first poem ever and I don't want your opinion on it. just read it, please. [bodytext] => In a quest of becoming colourless,
I exhault my eyes with the most profound trust,
Yet they are masters of deception, I wonder why....
A black 4 leaf clover, Prince B sends a purple valentine again.

"HOW DOES IT FEEL TO BE ONE OF THE BEAUTIFUL?"

Once more my feelings have succeded in confusing me,
but what's most amusing is I like the way it looks.
Distorted isn't it?, but it's beautiful, exceptionally beautiful.

Damn!

"HOW DOES IT FEEL TO BE ONE OF THE BEAUTIFUL?"

I drift along in a sea of compulsion,
whether or not I am dead... I have no idea.
I'm standing on a hill that overlooks a meadow
and I'm thinking... of absolutly nothing.

My current mood must resemble electric blue,
It's always tranquil but is make me bleed.
Questions mark constant, arrest my persona,
Ironic how that creates one for me, whatever is whatever.

A phenomenon that consists of life and death,
Hi Mr. Experiance... How was your trip to the moon.
I tear my thoughts with my own sarcastically piercing blade,
I love you, because you make me sick.

Distored isn't it?,
But it's beautiful,
Exceptionally beautiful!

Yeah!

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THE BEAUTIFUL

Contributed by darkkai on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



In a quest of becoming colourless,
I exhault my eyes with the most profound trust,
Yet they are masters of deception, I wonder why....
A black 4 leaf clover, Prince B sends a purple valentine again.

"HOW DOES IT FEEL TO BE ONE OF THE BEAUTIFUL?"

Once more my feelings have succeded in confusing me,
but what's most amusing is I like the way it looks.
Distorted isn't it?, but it's beautiful, exceptionally beautiful.

Damn!

"HOW DOES IT FEEL TO BE ONE OF THE BEAUTIFUL?"

I drift along in a sea of compulsion,
whether or not I am dead... I have no idea.
I'm standing on a hill that overlooks a meadow
and I'm thinking... of absolutly nothing.

My current mood must resemble electric blue,
It's always tranquil but is make me bleed.
Questions mark constant, arrest my persona,
Ironic how that creates one for me, whatever is whatever.

A phenomenon that consists of life and death,
Hi Mr. Experiance... How was your trip to the moon.
I tear my thoughts with my own sarcastically piercing blade,
I love you, because you make me sick.

Distored isn't it?,
But it's beautiful,
Exceptionally beautiful!

Yeah!





Copyright © darkkai ... [ 2003-01-22 15:40:00]
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Re: THE BEAUTIFUL (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 04:07:45 PM AEST
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Well I had to comment on this it was well done I thought! Good one! Christina


Re: THE BEAUTIFUL (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 04:26:34 PM AEST
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im sorry...but i really like this poem...i think it's one of the best ones you've done...i like it a lot...


Re: THE BEAUTIFUL (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 06:33:50 PM AEST
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sorry,but like the others,,it was well written,,a friend in words,,spooky


Re: THE BEAUTIFUL (User Rating: 1 )
by darkkai on Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 12:46:52 AM AEST
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As sole owner of the poem. most of you have wanted to comment on "The Beautiful" For the past ten years I have had many comments and opinions of all sorts.
Now after a few weeks of viewing and contemplateing of removal from this site. Sooo, All Who Read This May Now Comment. And again Thank You for your thoughts




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