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Array ( [sid] => 109536 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The First Time [time] => 2005-11-11 13:37:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The first time I looked into your eyes
My heart skipped a beat
Just long enough to let me know that
You are the one that I have been waiting for
The one who has been haunting my thoughts
Even though I had never met you

The first time that I kissed you
Time stopped
It was the best moment in my life
The first perfect kiss I had stolen
The only kiss to rattle my soul

The first time I held you close
I knew you were the one
I wanted to experience life with
To always be there

The first time we made love
I knew I was the luckiest man in the world
Forever was all too real

The first time we were one
I could hardly believe it was true

I will always love you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 2 [informant] => kaiba [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The First Time

Contributed by kaiba on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 01:37:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The first time I looked into your eyes
My heart skipped a beat
Just long enough to let me know that
You are the one that I have been waiting for
The one who has been haunting my thoughts
Even though I had never met you

The first time that I kissed you
Time stopped
It was the best moment in my life
The first perfect kiss I had stolen
The only kiss to rattle my soul

The first time I held you close
I knew you were the one
I wanted to experience life with
To always be there

The first time we made love
I knew I was the luckiest man in the world
Forever was all too real

The first time we were one
I could hardly believe it was true

I will always love you

Copyright © kaiba ... [ 2005-11-11 13:37:23]
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Re: The First Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 03:33:09 PM AEST
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I still get butterfiles when i read this, hehe, Very heartfelt and beautiful wirte. Can't wait to read more of your work!! Welcome to YPDC!!!!

Re: The First Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Shattered_soul on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 03:43:07 PM AEST
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Ok personaly, I LOVE your writing, I love the way it has no rhym (its my favroite kinda poetry) welcome to YPDC and i will be looking forward to more of your pieces.
~S.S

Re: The First Time (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamPoetess on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 12:40:50 AM AEST
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Drew, you are a romanticist, no way out of it. Your heart sure knows how to write a poem:>

I love thes two lines:>

Just long enough to let me know that
You are the one that I have been waiting for

It is so wonderful, your heart just knew that:>

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