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Array ( [sid] => 109535 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If Only (You Knew) [time] => 2005-11-11 13:26:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It will be shown with more than just words;
Then all your dreams would be knocking at your door.
If only I could write your name in the stars;
It'll be the brightest constellation by far.
If only you knew what you do to my knees;
Just wave your wand and you've got a spell over me.
If only I could fly with you like a dove in the sky;
Soar so far away for the rest of my life.
If only I found your slipper at the stroke of midnight;
You have the charm of Cinderella and the eyes of Snow White.

If only there was some way you could read my mind;
Now I can show you you're one of a kind.
I'll write it down in a song;
Serenade you at the stroke of dawn.
If only there was a flower that had your name;
I couldn't imagine a prettier bouquet.
If only you knew that you were born in God's eyes;
Like the stars and the Heaven's your essence is divine.
If only we were something out of a fairytale;
Because my ever after would be spent with an angel.

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If Only (You Knew)

Contributed by gospel.apostle on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 01:26:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

It will be shown with more than just words;
Then all your dreams would be knocking at your door.
If only I could write your name in the stars;
It'll be the brightest constellation by far.
If only you knew what you do to my knees;
Just wave your wand and you've got a spell over me.
If only I could fly with you like a dove in the sky;
Soar so far away for the rest of my life.
If only I found your slipper at the stroke of midnight;
You have the charm of Cinderella and the eyes of Snow White.

If only there was some way you could read my mind;
Now I can show you you're one of a kind.
I'll write it down in a song;
Serenade you at the stroke of dawn.
If only there was a flower that had your name;
I couldn't imagine a prettier bouquet.
If only you knew that you were born in God's eyes;
Like the stars and the Heaven's your essence is divine.
If only we were something out of a fairytale;
Because my ever after would be spent with an angel.

Copyright © gospel.apostle ... [ 2005-11-11 13:26:20]
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Re: If Only (You Knew) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 18th January 2006 @ 02:25:25 PM AEST
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This poem has lots of potential....I think maybe you can play with it a bit...
(just my humble opinion.)

Jenni

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