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Array ( [sid] => 109515 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my last tears [time] => 2005-11-11 06:01:31 [hometext] => comments welcome [bodytext] => my torrent of tears
form a waterfall
as i sit here knowing
i've no hope at all
i'm too far gone
it's time to be set free
but at least this way
i won't feel unhappy
this river of sadness
is the last one I'll cry
there'll be no more tears
after i die
now is my time
to escape from this pain
so i breathe my last breath
as i cry with the rain

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my last tears

Contributed by xXxmegsxXx on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 06:01:31 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

my torrent of tears
form a waterfall
as i sit here knowing
i've no hope at all
i'm too far gone
it's time to be set free
but at least this way
i won't feel unhappy
this river of sadness
is the last one I'll cry
there'll be no more tears
after i die
now is my time
to escape from this pain
so i breathe my last breath
as i cry with the rain

Copyright © xXxmegsxXx ... [ 2005-11-11 06:01:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: my last tears (User Rating: 1 )
by nannerz on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 10:26:36 PM AEST
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brillent write full of emotion cant wait to see some more
nannerz

Re: my last tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Artemis03 on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 10:59:59 PM AEST
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Wow... this write right here. Is bringing back so many emotions to me right now. Word can't even explain. But this is better then a good or great write.

Re: my last tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 04:08:11 PM AEST
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Such an emotionally packed poem filled with so much pain and sadness. You've expressed yourself so well with this write. The rhythm and flow absolutely senational.
You have the amazing ability of being able to pen down how you really feel. I can see you going a long way with your writing. Good luck and I hope that all is well with you.
*heartfelt hugs for you*
sue

Re: my last tears (User Rating: 1 )
by sleepykisser on Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 08:48:50 AM AEST
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the emotions that you describe in this poem are really well expressed. good job

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