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Once you were perfect now just weak.
Cast down from his good graces.
The infinite havoc you can wreak.

Just continue to sing your song.
Youve fallen a long way.
Excuses have their limits.
Still you have nothing say.

Lost in your hatred and sickness.
You find a new source of strength.
Suffocate in your past sins.
Youve outdown yourself, your evil has no length.

Once again there you go.
Falling and remaining hidden.
Preparing your diabolical rapture.
They keep preaching, but you wont listen.
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Ballad of the Fallen

Contributed by de5tructo on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 11:59:19 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Turn away from the light, embrace the dark.
Once you were perfect now just weak.
Cast down from his good graces.
The infinite havoc you can wreak.

Just continue to sing your song.
Youve fallen a long way.
Excuses have their limits.
Still you have nothing say.

Lost in your hatred and sickness.
You find a new source of strength.
Suffocate in your past sins.
Youve outdown yourself, your evil has no length.

Once again there you go.
Falling and remaining hidden.
Preparing your diabolical rapture.
They keep preaching, but you wont listen.

Copyright © de5tructo ... [ 2005-11-10 23:59:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Ballad of the Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 12:05:51 AM AEST
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This is a brilliant thought-provoking piece of writing, its deep, intense and inspirational. It flows wonderfully as well. I love it, thank you for sharing. :)

Take Care
- Becca

Re: Ballad of the Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by de5tructo on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 05:28:41 PM AEST
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I post my poetry on this site basically to share with others anonymously. It inspires me when others appreciate my poetry. Thanks alot.

-Drew (21 yrs old)

Re: Ballad of the Fallen (User Rating: 1 )
by grim6669 on Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 01:39:07 PM AEST
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oooooOOOOOooooo...that was awsome!!!
*~amber~*

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