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Array ( [sid] => 109500 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tales of a First Grade Nothing [time] => 2005-11-10 23:08:45 [hometext] => The only poem I have, besides "Death of a Guardsman" I think is worth reading.....>< Comment please! [bodytext] => Tales of a First Grade Nothing:

For much of first grade, I was entranced;
Enraptured by my very own little romance;
Yet as I reminisce, and call it all back,
I can but try and puzzle out what we both lacked.

I remember you always beat me soundly
In all our many games of Yahtzee;

I remember holding you oh so tenderly;
(While we played Humpty Dumpty);

I remember running off with you
And telling no-one where we’d been;

I remember our hot and sweaty nights
(While we played on your old jungle gym);

I remember your hair mixed with mine
As we made snow angels in the grass

I thought you’d be happy when I popped the question
But instead, you said, “I hoped you’d never ask”.

So now, another question has its debut;
Before you left, you never told me adieu;
But seeing as how I have not yet forgotten you;
Can you say that you remember me too? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 75 [informant] => ChibiMiroku [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Tales of a First Grade Nothing

Contributed by ChibiMiroku on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 11:08:45 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Tales of a First Grade Nothing:

For much of first grade, I was entranced;
Enraptured by my very own little romance;
Yet as I reminisce, and call it all back,
I can but try and puzzle out what we both lacked.

I remember you always beat me soundly
In all our many games of Yahtzee;

I remember holding you oh so tenderly;
(While we played Humpty Dumpty);

I remember running off with you
And telling no-one where we’d been;

I remember our hot and sweaty nights
(While we played on your old jungle gym);

I remember your hair mixed with mine
As we made snow angels in the grass

I thought you’d be happy when I popped the question
But instead, you said, “I hoped you’d never ask”.

So now, another question has its debut;
Before you left, you never told me adieu;
But seeing as how I have not yet forgotten you;
Can you say that you remember me too?

Copyright Â© ChibiMiroku ... [ 2005-11-10 23:08:45]
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Re: Tales of a First Grade Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 04:59:36 PM AEST
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Vincent such beautiful memories, yet such a sad ending. It's evident that you still have feelings for this girl. Your poem speaks from the heart. An outstanding heartfelt write. Always a treasured experience to read such remarkable work by a very talented poet.
Who knows what the future brings and what paths we end up taking.
*hugs for you my friend*
sue

Re: Tales of a First Grade Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 06:31:40 PM AEST
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Good poem, sad heart...and hard memories to live with...hang tight. there's something better

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