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Array ( [sid] => 109497 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => nothing to lose [time] => 2005-11-10 21:49:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => the tears wont stop
and i'm alone...
like always
i have nothing to show

or lose

so i sit
staring at the mirror
not wanting to really see
i chose my weapon
i change myself again
no one will ever know me

and the pain
the repetitive pain
screaming inside
pushing my real self aside

wanting to stop
not wanting to see
wanting to have someone else to depend on
other than me

waiting
not wanting to be alone...
like always
i have nothing to show

or lose

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 32 [informant] => SmileSkinDeep [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

nothing to lose

Contributed by SmileSkinDeep on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 09:49:03 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

the tears wont stop
and i'm alone...
like always
i have nothing to show

or lose

so i sit
staring at the mirror
not wanting to really see
i chose my weapon
i change myself again
no one will ever know me

and the pain
the repetitive pain
screaming inside
pushing my real self aside

wanting to stop
not wanting to see
wanting to have someone else to depend on
other than me

waiting
not wanting to be alone...
like always
i have nothing to show

or lose

Copyright © SmileSkinDeep ... [ 2005-11-10 21:49:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: nothing to lose (User Rating: 1 )
by SeanMcHaney on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 09:58:20 PM AEST
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So sad but very well written!

Re: nothing to lose (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 12:14:04 AM AEST
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THIS IS SUCH A SAD POEM! BUT ITS IS
VERY GOOD. AND WELL WRITTEN..

Re: nothing to lose (User Rating: 1 )
by weepingprophet on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 02:38:14 AM AEST
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a joy to read. ironic.

~pain lies within us all, it is the realization-that we are alive~weepingprophet

Re: nothing to lose (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 10:36:20 AM AEST
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i like it its sad but really good

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