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Array ( [sid] => 109482 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ITS like a scary fable or a carnaval ride [time] => 2005-11-10 19:06:22 [hometext] => i had this thought while alone at night dont ask if this is song lyrics or poetry i really dont know but i am going abstract tonight [bodytext] => ITS like a scary fable
or a carnaval ride

ITS like your lovers breath
on the back of your neck

Its the brightness on a soul
of a child

Its the innocent on a murders
smile
when they pulled the lever
on the killers fate

Its the love of
all things

Its the look in your
eyes

ITS my world the one
i disguise

Its part of my fate
what a twisted way it lies

Its part of my life
when you look in my eyes
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ITS like a scary fable or a carnaval ride

Contributed by lostrelic on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 07:06:22 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

ITS like a scary fable
or a carnaval ride

ITS like your lovers breath
on the back of your neck

Its the brightness on a soul
of a child

Its the innocent on a murders
smile
when they pulled the lever
on the killers fate

Its the love of
all things

Its the look in your
eyes

ITS my world the one
i disguise

Its part of my fate
what a twisted way it lies

Its part of my life
when you look in my eyes
when you see my disguise

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2005-11-10 19:06:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ITS like a scary fable or a carnaval ride (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 08:25:42 PM AEST
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Well executed, and interesting. I think abstract poetry is probably the best way for a writer to hone their skill at imagery, because it has a way of asking for one's best, rather than selecting based on relevance.

Andrew

Re: ITS like a scary fable or a carnaval ride (User Rating: 1 )
by nannerz on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 10:18:57 PM AEST
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hmmm it was interasting but i liked it all the same :)
vampyre

Re: ITS like a scary fable or a carnaval ride (User Rating: 1 )
by edwynne on Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 11:24:02 AM AEST
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hey.... love the title of this one.. great idea.. the poem is good to!!..well done

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