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Array ( [sid] => 10947 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Have No Pity [time] => 2003-01-22 13:20:00 [hometext] => This is written to my mother, about the things she has done to my sister, and ultimitly, to my entire family. [bodytext] => Forced into crossroads,
Unable to choose,
It's hard to decide things now,
When your choice decides who you loose.

Sorry that I have no pity,
For you knew it'd come to this,
Walking the decisions of your past,
And now it's you I might miss.

You sat and bravely smiled,
While learning of the truth,
What he did to your youngest daughter,
Not even questioning his couth.

You stood beside HIM,
As MY sister sat and cried,
All she wanted was YOUR suppport,
And your wrong, she NEVER lied.

In the short years you were there,
For me and her, you shone.
You said we'd never lose you,
But in effect your gone.

All the tears you've cost me,
And all the pain I've held,
Because YOU didn't care for me,
Has left me shelled.

But for you I have no pity,
For this child that he 'tried'
Thinks your leaving is her fault,
And she slowly fades away inside. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 6 [informant] => yellow_sundragon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

I Have No Pity

Contributed by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 01:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Forced into crossroads,
Unable to choose,
It's hard to decide things now,
When your choice decides who you loose.

Sorry that I have no pity,
For you knew it'd come to this,
Walking the decisions of your past,
And now it's you I might miss.

You sat and bravely smiled,
While learning of the truth,
What he did to your youngest daughter,
Not even questioning his couth.

You stood beside HIM,
As MY sister sat and cried,
All she wanted was YOUR suppport,
And your wrong, she NEVER lied.

In the short years you were there,
For me and her, you shone.
You said we'd never lose you,
But in effect your gone.

All the tears you've cost me,
And all the pain I've held,
Because YOU didn't care for me,
Has left me shelled.

But for you I have no pity,
For this child that he 'tried'
Thinks your leaving is her fault,
And she slowly fades away inside.

Copyright © yellow_sundragon ... [ 2003-01-22 13:20:00]
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Re: I Have No Pity (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 01:47:19 PM AEST
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the pain you must suffer, very emotional here, find comfort in yourself, so you may help you sister heal, thanks for sharing this sad part of life

Re: I Have No Pity (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 04:33:43 PM AEST
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this is beautiful...one of the most touching poems i have ever read...oh...it's beautiful...

Re: I Have No Pity (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 07:10:18 PM AEST
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Wow this was a very honest poem... they are the best. I felt a lot of pain in this one. I enjoyed this I really did it was emotional and gripping. I have found that times heals all wounds... or maybe just numbs the pain. Hang in there.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: I Have No Pity (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 11:49:25 AM AEST
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oh my god. i'm crying here,that is such an amazin poem, i have no words to describe it. its so amazin. wow. I'm really crying.

Re: I Have No Pity (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 11:49:55 PM AEST
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oh dear...... this is an amazing write.... thank you for sharing..my best to you and yours....hugs nessa

Re: I Have No Pity (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 01:22:57 AM AEST
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Wow...Sundragon, This is really sad...I'm sorry you and your sister had to go through this... I hope you are both well and happy..
Hugs
Jenni

Re: I Have No Pity (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 06:12:52 AM AEST
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this poem is heartwrenching... my mother is a bit of an issue in my life, for different reasons... but it does seem to hurt worse when it comes from from one who is supposed to love you the most... blessings to you and your sister... my the stars shine on you and help you to heal...

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