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Array ( [sid] => 109462 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Brick Walla [time] => 2005-11-10 12:38:30 [hometext] => I was sitting here and it hit me....like a brick wall.... [bodytext] => You were talking to me like i was all to see
Trying to take down everything that i have placed
You started getting into me
I started letting you get through
I started getting into you
you started letting me through
I thought that it was going to work
Who knew that you would just be a jerk

*You started breaking down these walls i have built
brick by brick you were trying to fix
All this pain that i have gone through
Yet in the end you just disapeared too*

No one knows where you have gone
its obvious that i do not belong
I thought you cared and i thought you knew
I was really starting to fall for you
You made promises that i thought you would keep
You were getting into me so deep
I wanted things to go right this time
Now im lost in this unreal rhyme

*You started breaking down these walls i have built
brick by brick you were trying to fix
All this pain that i have gone through
Yet in the end you just disapeared too*

I dont know if i did something wrong
that morning didnt mean a thing at all
I havent heard from you since that day
And you are so far, i cant reach your place
No answered calls, no answered message
I blame all this pain i am feeling on you
Damn, i thought so much more from you
All that time you spent breaking it down

*You started breaking down these walls i have built
brick by brick you were trying to fix
All this pain that i have gone through
Yet in the end you just disapeared too*

You have disapeared too
and there is not a thing i can do
You have gone to an unknown place
did she draw you in with her disgrace
are you falling for all her lies
letting her build you up with fake pride
She did it once, she'll do it again
Why wont you allow yourself to move one and mend

*You started breaking down these walls i have built
brick by brick you were trying to fix
All this pain that i have gone through
Yet in the end you just disapeared too*

I thought i meant something to you
You were starting to break through
Is she filling you with lies
The wall is taller then before
it has doubled in size
Good luck to you, cause you ****** up something that could have been good
I could have been good to you......if you only knew...

*You started breaking down these walls i have built
brick by brick you were trying to fix
All this pain that i have gone through
Yet in the end you just disapeared too*

You lied....you took my pride.....ive fallen back down
you disapeared too, just like you said you wouldnt do
you lied.....I am giving up.....Good-bye





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Brick Walla

Contributed by drmbeliever on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 12:38:30 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



You were talking to me like i was all to see
Trying to take down everything that i have placed
You started getting into me
I started letting you get through
I started getting into you
you started letting me through
I thought that it was going to work
Who knew that you would just be a jerk

*You started breaking down these walls i have built
brick by brick you were trying to fix
All this pain that i have gone through
Yet in the end you just disapeared too*

No one knows where you have gone
its obvious that i do not belong
I thought you cared and i thought you knew
I was really starting to fall for you
You made promises that i thought you would keep
You were getting into me so deep
I wanted things to go right this time
Now im lost in this unreal rhyme

*You started breaking down these walls i have built
brick by brick you were trying to fix
All this pain that i have gone through
Yet in the end you just disapeared too*

I dont know if i did something wrong
that morning didnt mean a thing at all
I havent heard from you since that day
And you are so far, i cant reach your place
No answered calls, no answered message
I blame all this pain i am feeling on you
Damn, i thought so much more from you
All that time you spent breaking it down

*You started breaking down these walls i have built
brick by brick you were trying to fix
All this pain that i have gone through
Yet in the end you just disapeared too*

You have disapeared too
and there is not a thing i can do
You have gone to an unknown place
did she draw you in with her disgrace
are you falling for all her lies
letting her build you up with fake pride
She did it once, she'll do it again
Why wont you allow yourself to move one and mend

*You started breaking down these walls i have built
brick by brick you were trying to fix
All this pain that i have gone through
Yet in the end you just disapeared too*

I thought i meant something to you
You were starting to break through
Is she filling you with lies
The wall is taller then before
it has doubled in size
Good luck to you, cause you ****** up something that could have been good
I could have been good to you......if you only knew...

*You started breaking down these walls i have built
brick by brick you were trying to fix
All this pain that i have gone through
Yet in the end you just disapeared too*

You lied....you took my pride.....ive fallen back down
you disapeared too, just like you said you wouldnt do
you lied.....I am giving up.....Good-bye









Copyright © drmbeliever ... [ 2005-11-10 12:38:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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