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Array ( [sid] => 109436 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 9 At Night [time] => 2005-11-10 02:08:24 [hometext] => Another that I wrote in 8th grade. It's about my mom when she got in a fight with her ex-fiance and how I felt, and how I think she felt. [bodytext] => Screaming and yelling
Is all I can hear
I know it is real
I can feel it so near

Wanting to live
Wanting to die
Why do I stay here
It's just a lie

I hate this night
It started with a tear
But at nine at night
Her body was filled with fear

What should she do? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 65 [informant] => tacit_pain [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

9 At Night

Contributed by tacit_pain on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:08:24 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Screaming and yelling
Is all I can hear
I know it is real
I can feel it so near

Wanting to live
Wanting to die
Why do I stay here
It's just a lie

I hate this night
It started with a tear
But at nine at night
Her body was filled with fear

What should she do?

Copyright © tacit_pain ... [ 2005-11-10 02:08:24]
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Re: 9 At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by SeanMcHaney on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:27:12 AM AEST
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Oh man that is so sad! I do hope that things are better now!

Re: 9 At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 03:19:57 AM AEST
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Ive felt every word of this poem because I was witness to one of my mum's ex's beating her in front of me. It is such a hard thing to recover from and I'm pretty sure I never will because it happened so long ago and I still remember it as if it happened yesterday.

This is such a powerful write in such a small amount of words, but that makes for the best type of poem. You have such talent.

*hugs*

Re: 9 At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 03:27:13 AM AEST
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Not an easy task to live about, violence is not acceptable, I pray each day and night for all, be safe, what should you do?

Raquel Leah :D

Re: 9 At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 06:27:48 PM AEST
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Life can be so hard on both ends of that stick..that you understood sufficiently to create this speaks a lot about you..

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