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Array ( [sid] => 109400 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unchanged [time] => 2005-11-09 18:13:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => No matter how my life has changed
You always seem there to haunt it
You linger in the dark corners
Where my eyes they do not see
You know I am always there
I don't pretend to hide from you
I just want to keep living my life
There is still so much more
You want from me
That I am unwilling to give
You keep trying to persuade me
But I still remain ever vigilant
Unflinching and unchanged [comments] => 3 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 75 [informant] => Evening_Star [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Unchanged

Contributed by Evening_Star on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 06:13:03 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

No matter how my life has changed
You always seem there to haunt it
You linger in the dark corners
Where my eyes they do not see
You know I am always there
I don't pretend to hide from you
I just want to keep living my life
There is still so much more
You want from me
That I am unwilling to give
You keep trying to persuade me
But I still remain ever vigilant
Unflinching and unchanged

Copyright © Evening_Star ... [ 2005-11-09 18:13:03]
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Re: Unchanged (User Rating: 1 )
by weepingprophet on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:04:54 PM AEST
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to me- a presumptious person today- this write seems extremely religious. i hate playing the religion card but when you speak of omnipresence not through memory it makes me thing of a higher power. If you believe in God just give it to Him. whatever you are holding onto is worthless-regardless. what does anything amount to in the end? we are what we purchase-hollow satsifaction.

~here i am kneeling forever between repentance and rebellion. kneeling forever between fragile and broken. between choices and choosing... i'm losing. IF HEAVEN WEEPS IT NEVER CEASES IN MY NAME~weepingprophet

Re: Unchanged (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:20:53 PM AEST
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Deep, and true. I'm glad you aren't giving in, stay strong, and keep writing.

~Riisa

Re: Unchanged (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:45:46 PM AEST
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I hope this poem wasn't about a guy/girl pressuring you to do something you don't want to... because if it is just stick to your guns hunni *hugs*

Wonderful poem

Love ya,
~Kiela~

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