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Array ( [sid] => 109396 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What I Had [time] => 2005-11-09 17:06:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As I thought we were getting closer
You thought we were falling apart
When I fell in love all over again
You were keeping me away from your heart.

How can this happen to me
I didn't even see it coming
You had a fake face on
After all the kisses and hugging

Your excuse was that you needed to experience life
You said your still young and needed to date
When I was already able to have you as my wife
I guess this was coming to me what a horrible fate

I hope you made the right decision
Because it really tore me apart
I'm going to really miss the times together
When you had my heart [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 22 [informant] => powerlinez [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

What I Had

Contributed by powerlinez on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 05:06:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

As I thought we were getting closer
You thought we were falling apart
When I fell in love all over again
You were keeping me away from your heart.

How can this happen to me
I didn't even see it coming
You had a fake face on
After all the kisses and hugging

Your excuse was that you needed to experience life
You said your still young and needed to date
When I was already able to have you as my wife
I guess this was coming to me what a horrible fate

I hope you made the right decision
Because it really tore me apart
I'm going to really miss the times together
When you had my heart

Copyright © powerlinez ... [ 2005-11-09 17:06:07]
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Re: What I Had (User Rating: 1 )
by tears_of_blood on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 05:52:34 PM AEST
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good poem i know how you feel in away hope every thing works out for you.

Re: What I Had (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:24:44 AM AEST
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beatiful write.. I love the last line especially.. its sad when people we love leave us for no reasoning at all.. its been done to me too.. however hang in there.. everything happens for a reason and times heals all wounds.. awesome write though

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