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Array ( [sid] => 10939 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => no title [time] => 2003-01-22 10:40:00 [hometext] => anyone have a title suggestion? [bodytext] => I stared at you from far away
At all the magic around you
You have a smile that cuts through me
Like wind on a winter morning
I watched you talking with all your friends
And when i see you i love you more and more
Even if thats hard for you to see

I love how you make me smile
I love how you make dreams come true
Whenever you talk to me
I make pointless replies
But i can never sleep the whole night through
And it has something to do with you

Everyone said that I'm a mad man
But i know these feeling and i love you
Right now im sitting in my room
And calling for the bright moon
And everytime i say your name
I think of how I can't speak to you
And no matter what I do my silence haunts me [comments] => 5 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Stalkee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

no title

Contributed by Stalkee on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 10:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I stared at you from far away
At all the magic around you
You have a smile that cuts through me
Like wind on a winter morning
I watched you talking with all your friends
And when i see you i love you more and more
Even if thats hard for you to see

I love how you make me smile
I love how you make dreams come true
Whenever you talk to me
I make pointless replies
But i can never sleep the whole night through
And it has something to do with you

Everyone said that I'm a mad man
But i know these feeling and i love you
Right now im sitting in my room
And calling for the bright moon
And everytime i say your name
I think of how I can't speak to you
And no matter what I do my silence haunts me

Copyright © Stalkee ... [ 2003-01-22 10:40:00]
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Re: no title (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 10:53:59 AM AEST
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Hmm.....a title? Let's see...

"My Silence Haunts Me"
"DevilishToy"
"Beneath Your Dreams"
"Silent Passions"
Beautiful write Stalkee..i enjoyed this one alot...it's clear you write from the beauty of your heart...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: no title (User Rating: 1 )
by Dani on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 12:58:00 PM AEST
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How about "Like Wind On A Winter Morning"

This is beautiful!! :)

Re: no title (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 01:58:48 PM AEST
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"Wind on a winter morning" that would be a great title, the words are so powerful in this writing, use it if need be, thanks for sharing

Re: no title (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:24:05 PM AEST
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hey, thanks for suggestions everyone! im so glad you all enjoyed it!!!!!

Re: no title (User Rating: 1 )
by banjo on Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 02:39:15 PM AEST
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Yeah, my suggestion would be "my silence haunts me." Wind on a winter morning is the best line -- nice use of metaphor -- but doesn't really capture the poem. And I hope you will never title a poem "silent passions."

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