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The wind ran through his hair
And the sun glared at him from the sky,
No humanity is left
And no sanity to be seen.
EVIL
(It trailed through the valley without a name,
Without a soul or a face,
Wherever it went it left decay,
Death and fear.)
GOOD
He sped along seeing nothing,
He hoped and prayed,
The heat was harsh and senseless,
And so was the beast.
EVIL
It smelt a human a few miles away
And started to chase,
It passed a circus on the way,
Only ghosts left now.
GOOD
He hears a noise
And hides away,
The beast is approaching
To find his prey.
EVIL
It sees the last one
And pounces with teeth bared and eyes glaring,
The good fights back with all his breath
And the beast of judgement feels his wrath.
GOOD+EVIL=GOOD.
GOOD WILL ALWAYS SUCCEED.

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JOURNEY

Contributed by chazthepoet on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 03:53:40 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

GOOD
The wind ran through his hair
And the sun glared at him from the sky,
No humanity is left
And no sanity to be seen.
EVIL
(It trailed through the valley without a name,
Without a soul or a face,
Wherever it went it left decay,
Death and fear.)
GOOD
He sped along seeing nothing,
He hoped and prayed,
The heat was harsh and senseless,
And so was the beast.
EVIL
It smelt a human a few miles away
And started to chase,
It passed a circus on the way,
Only ghosts left now.
GOOD
He hears a noise
And hides away,
The beast is approaching
To find his prey.
EVIL
It sees the last one
And pounces with teeth bared and eyes glaring,
The good fights back with all his breath
And the beast of judgement feels his wrath.
GOOD+EVIL=GOOD.
GOOD WILL ALWAYS SUCCEED.

Copyright © chazthepoet ... [ 2005-11-09 15:53:40]
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Re: JOURNEY (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 06:52:30 PM AEST
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A journey of running away from evil to be with good... Hmmm this write takes some thinking of what you want to convey. Good will always prevail at least in my faith thru my heart. Sometimes, it takes the bad of evils to happen before the good can take place. interesting write. AMber Rose Yeager

Re: JOURNEY (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 06:49:14 PM AEST
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That was a very interseting point on life and reminds me of a story. A man envelpoed his demon with the good in his heart and thus his demon was defeated by love.

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