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Array ( [sid] => 109357 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hey You, Yeah You [time] => 2005-11-09 03:10:00 [hometext] => Come on guys--Your killing me here [bodytext] => Hey everybody
Whats goin on
Thanx for takin a minute
To read my little poem

This ones a little goofy
But thats how I am
Here's where y'all come in
to help me with my plan

Just click on my poems
And write what ya think
I'm beggin ya people
Your drivin me to drink

See I've got 4 kids of my own
But we're the kool-aid house from hell
So believe me when I tell ya
An adult comment would be swell

Do you think I'm beggin for compliments
I swear that that's not it
Feel free to tell me
Your poems sound like ****

So see that little name up there
There are a few that you can read
Then drop a little comment off
It's all I really need

To those of you that have
dropped me a line
Just wanna say thank you
I appreciate your time [comments] => 5 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 43 [informant] => kaysea [notes] => |||||||Partially edited out, due to the use of letters and a dollar sign to indicate a banned word. ♦Moderator_14♦||||||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Hey You, Yeah You

Contributed by kaysea on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 03:10:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Hey everybody
Whats goin on
Thanx for takin a minute
To read my little poem

This ones a little goofy
But thats how I am
Here's where y'all come in
to help me with my plan

Just click on my poems
And write what ya think
I'm beggin ya people
Your drivin me to drink

See I've got 4 kids of my own
But we're the kool-aid house from hell
So believe me when I tell ya
An adult comment would be swell

Do you think I'm beggin for compliments
I swear that that's not it
Feel free to tell me
Your poems sound like ****

So see that little name up there
There are a few that you can read
Then drop a little comment off
It's all I really need

To those of you that have
dropped me a line
Just wanna say thank you
I appreciate your time

Copyright © kaysea ... [ 2005-11-09 03:10:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hey You, Yeah You (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 03:51:43 AM AEST
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lol, love it.

Cheers for the read :)

Re: Hey You, Yeah You (User Rating: 1 )
by OzChick on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 08:45:04 AM AEST
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This is really cute. I know whay it is like to be starved of adult conversation. This is a good write, well done.

Re: Hey You, Yeah You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 09:09:53 AM AEST
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Very witty. There is a natural rhythm to your writes.

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