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Array ( [sid] => 109352 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Uphill Climb [time] => 2005-11-09 00:06:42 [hometext] => I wrote this for my brother...comments welcome [bodytext] => 8-17-05 3:09 Am

You struggle, you fall
You slip, you climb
Through all hell
You’re losing your mind.

Broken like a puzzle,
Unable to be put back together,
You can’t go back to who you used to be,
Gather what is left of your sanity,
Take that uphill climb.

Look toward the sunlight,
Look for the way,
See you’re not alone,
No more than words cay say.

Pray in your darkest hour,
Find strength to gain back your power,
Fill up your empty lonely soul,
Angels will hold you up,
Please take that uphill climb.

Tears may fall in the dark,
Death might be knocking at your door,
You won’t give in to hated sins,
Keep telling yourself “I’ll beat this I’ll win”
Forgiveness is granted slowly in time,
Promise us this will be,
The end of the line.

Numb is how you wanted to feel,
High on pot nothing seemed real,
Fell in black darkness,
Fell back on demons,
Stabbed by bitterness,
Soaked with betrayal,
Fight nightmares alone in jail.

Remember at the beginning of your climb,
You have a chance at life,
Another shot at your broken hope,
One more second chance to do,
Your uphill climb.

© Care S. “2005”
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Uphill Climb

Contributed by kiela_Rox_mi_Socks on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 12:06:42 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

8-17-05 3:09 Am

You struggle, you fall
You slip, you climb
Through all hell
You’re losing your mind.

Broken like a puzzle,
Unable to be put back together,
You can’t go back to who you used to be,
Gather what is left of your sanity,
Take that uphill climb.

Look toward the sunlight,
Look for the way,
See you’re not alone,
No more than words cay say.

Pray in your darkest hour,
Find strength to gain back your power,
Fill up your empty lonely soul,
Angels will hold you up,
Please take that uphill climb.

Tears may fall in the dark,
Death might be knocking at your door,
You won’t give in to hated sins,
Keep telling yourself “I’ll beat this I’ll win”
Forgiveness is granted slowly in time,
Promise us this will be,
The end of the line.

Numb is how you wanted to feel,
High on pot nothing seemed real,
Fell in black darkness,
Fell back on demons,
Stabbed by bitterness,
Soaked with betrayal,
Fight nightmares alone in jail.

Remember at the beginning of your climb,
You have a chance at life,
Another shot at your broken hope,
One more second chance to do,
Your uphill climb.

© Care S. “2005”

Copyright Â© kiela_Rox_mi_Socks ... [ 2005-11-09 00:06:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Uphill Climb (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 01:18:26 AM AEST
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darn good poem there. I found it inspiring
that even through adversity your brother will
beat back his pain. Great poem keep up the
awesome writing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Uphill Climb (User Rating: 1 )
by SeanMcHaney on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 01:37:23 AM AEST
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Very well done. Sometimes in our Darkest hour we find what it is that gives us the Strenght to climb on.

Re: Uphill Climb (User Rating: 1 )
by Coral on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 02:55:01 AM AEST
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very well writ. i love the way you let it flow.
AWESOME.
there's always light at the end of the tunnel but it's up to us whether we choose to walk towards it or not.
Take care,

VaLeRiE

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