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Array ( [sid] => 109311 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => brainwashed [time] => 2005-11-08 15:04:50 [hometext] => comments please [bodytext] => sick suffering,
down underneath,
mind is bleeding,
twisted lies,
come and find,
the truth i hide,
that dwells below,
all i despise,
lies melt away,
truth bleeds through,
out with the old,
and in with the new,
little secrets i hide from you,
when you hear this,
you pain's more blue,
stomach churns,
mind aches and burns,
you've had your chance,
so say goodbye,
and give somebody,
else a try,
stop your smiles,
this is no game,
you're dealing with me,
and i'm insane,
i'm fu**ed up,
in my twisted head,
you'll think about me,
and what i've said,
you'll think about me,
when you're in bed,
trying to sleep,
all through the night,
but you can't,
cause you're in fright,
i'm in your thoughts,
like all the time,
i'm brainwashing,
you fu**ing mind! [comments] => 6 [counter] => 342 [topic] => 13 [informant] => grim6669 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

brainwashed

Contributed by grim6669 on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 03:04:50 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

sick suffering,
down underneath,
mind is bleeding,
twisted lies,
come and find,
the truth i hide,
that dwells below,
all i despise,
lies melt away,
truth bleeds through,
out with the old,
and in with the new,
little secrets i hide from you,
when you hear this,
you pain's more blue,
stomach churns,
mind aches and burns,
you've had your chance,
so say goodbye,
and give somebody,
else a try,
stop your smiles,
this is no game,
you're dealing with me,
and i'm insane,
i'm fu**ed up,
in my twisted head,
you'll think about me,
and what i've said,
you'll think about me,
when you're in bed,
trying to sleep,
all through the night,
but you can't,
cause you're in fright,
i'm in your thoughts,
like all the time,
i'm brainwashing,
you fu**ing mind!

Copyright © grim6669 ... [ 2005-11-08 15:04:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: brainwashed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 03:19:20 PM AEST
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Wow!! sure you are not my evil twin lol..
wonderful write..feelin in this just explode with the ring of truth for me.. keep it up
~~~Michelle~~~

Re: brainwashed (User Rating: 1 )
by Drmbeliever on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 03:45:38 PM AEST
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Nice one! keep it up, i like this stuff! :) *heather*

Re: brainwashed (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 04:50:40 PM AEST
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The poem is creative, and very intense and powerful. It seems to transition from you experiencing the most pain to you doing better and the other party feeling the most pain and loss.

A thought provoking write
Good job, Amber

Will

Re: brainwashed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 04:16:03 AM AEST
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This is such a sincere poem, I am sure many feelings feel out there... good write..

Raquel Leah :D

Re: brainwashed (User Rating: 1 )
by His_Infernal_Majesty on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 03:55:44 PM AEST
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Hi, just wanted to say thxs for reading my stuff and after trying to return the favor, I must say that I have just read all your poems and have to say I enjoyed every single one. Your very gifted. keep writing your peoms and i'll keep reading them. Laterz

Re: brainwashed (User Rating: 1 )
by eternal_sorrows on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 11:23:25 PM AEST
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I really like this!! What an excellent write! I am looking forward to reading more.

ES

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