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beneath curtains on the lawn
I'll wear this coffin, while i'm talkin'
so she can't carry me along

I never once knew, that she was once blue
and forever lost within a pill
I think i'll join gain, to lose but no pain
and then to see what's left to kill

This answer's not gone, but to this new dawn
I'll wish the winter was an angel
So then i'd know white, more than just this dim light
i know i'll never know the graceful

Pills aren't passion, but numb white fashion
and God can't change the season
I love her Candy, it comes in handy
there's never been a reason.

dw

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Winter was an angel

Contributed by In_a_While on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 03:01:57 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

On this evening, she said she'd leave me
beneath curtains on the lawn
I'll wear this coffin, while i'm talkin'
so she can't carry me along

I never once knew, that she was once blue
and forever lost within a pill
I think i'll join gain, to lose but no pain
and then to see what's left to kill

This answer's not gone, but to this new dawn
I'll wish the winter was an angel
So then i'd know white, more than just this dim light
i know i'll never know the graceful

Pills aren't passion, but numb white fashion
and God can't change the season
I love her Candy, it comes in handy
there's never been a reason.

dw

Copyright © In_a_While ... [ 2005-11-08 15:01:57]
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Re: Winter was an angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 03:38:29 PM AEST
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thanks for the good read,,I liked this a lot,,you get a very well done,,from me,,

Re: Winter was an angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 03:47:12 PM AEST
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Hey dw it's great to be back and reading ur work again. I like this poem alot. It has alot of depth and meaning. Well done on such a great write.
*hugs*
sue

Re: Winter was an angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 01:51:24 PM AEST
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ANOTHER SUPERB POEM! I love reading your writes..you're one of my favorite poets!
ALINA
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