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Array ( [sid] => 109307 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my life [time] => 2005-11-08 14:49:59 [hometext] => please comment...good or bad...i never get comments anymore!... [bodytext] => here lies my life,
there goes my soul,
i'm trying to hold on to pain,
and walk a distant stroll,
it's hard not turning back,
because the future still beholds,
a mystery unsolved before,
the truth still yet unfolds,
i'm winding back the stop watch,
i'm searching through my mind,
i'm trying to cross the border,
of my future's past in time,
something's telling me to stop,
telling me not to go,
i'm wondering if i should listen,
but then i'd never know,
it's hard deciding what to do,
when no one really cares,
and there's no one there to guide you,
what will time declare,
and then there's the world,
it treats me like sh**,
just because i'm not the same,
just because i'm different,
but that's what i don't understand,
why do they pretend to care,
it's not their life,IT'S MINE!,
so why do they have to stare,
they start to point,
then they laugh at me,
why the hell can't i,
just live happily,
i deserve to have a life,
i deserve much more than this,
i deserve to live a perfect life,
well, at least not as bad as it is,
now i'm asking you nicely,
please, take a step back,
and if your gonna laugh at me,
don't even make contact,
just leave me alone,
cause i'm sick of it all,
and if you keep it up,
you just might fall,
slowly you're doing it,
you're driving me insane,
look what you've accomplished,
look what i've became. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 13 [informant] => grim6669 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
my life

Contributed by grim6669 on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 02:49:59 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



here lies my life,
there goes my soul,
i'm trying to hold on to pain,
and walk a distant stroll,
it's hard not turning back,
because the future still beholds,
a mystery unsolved before,
the truth still yet unfolds,
i'm winding back the stop watch,
i'm searching through my mind,
i'm trying to cross the border,
of my future's past in time,
something's telling me to stop,
telling me not to go,
i'm wondering if i should listen,
but then i'd never know,
it's hard deciding what to do,
when no one really cares,
and there's no one there to guide you,
what will time declare,
and then there's the world,
it treats me like sh**,
just because i'm not the same,
just because i'm different,
but that's what i don't understand,
why do they pretend to care,
it's not their life,IT'S MINE!,
so why do they have to stare,
they start to point,
then they laugh at me,
why the hell can't i,
just live happily,
i deserve to have a life,
i deserve much more than this,
i deserve to live a perfect life,
well, at least not as bad as it is,
now i'm asking you nicely,
please, take a step back,
and if your gonna laugh at me,
don't even make contact,
just leave me alone,
cause i'm sick of it all,
and if you keep it up,
you just might fall,
slowly you're doing it,
you're driving me insane,
look what you've accomplished,
look what i've became.




Copyright © grim6669 ... [ 2005-11-08 14:49:59]
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Re: my life (User Rating: 1 )
by Drmbeliever on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 03:04:48 PM AEST
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WOW. I can really connect with this one. I know those emotions, you should go check out some of my stuff...well i only have 2 things, but yeah. :)


Re: my life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 03:13:44 PM AEST
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amazing!! i can relate to this so muchh..Tysvm for sharin great work
You are not alone in theses feelings.
Hope time will help you get threw this pain
sendin you a hug
~~~Michelle~~~


Re: my life (User Rating: 1 )
by poisonpen00ad on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 08:37:11 PM AEST
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Great write. powerful and full of emotion.
Peace.

C.




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