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[sid] => 10929
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => Duke of My Heart
[time] => 2003-01-22 07:40:00
[hometext] => To my heartbeat, my truimph, My Travis, My son, love is you ........ he is 15 yrs old, the best teen a mother could ask for
[bodytext] => Against thee sunlit moon, of day,
my womb within, I carry thee,
of my flesh, and labored breath,
truimph of my heart, he be,
Wouldst' on October morn,
become then, my greatest joy,
pure of heart, in angel infancy,
of my own flesh, a boy,
Be such, a sight, of truest love,
my breast, I then lay ...... he,
In my eyes, no other could,
take this, my heart, from me,
Angel of pure infancy,
thee riches, of my soul,
displayed upon my everyday,
my truimph, made so whole,
No other couldst, give such effect,
I, subdue'd, by such a sight,
in every conscious way, My Travis,
your the truimph, of my life!
[comments] => 13
[counter] => 162
[topic] => 38
[informant] => Valerie_Pearson
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 25
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Tributes
)
Duke of My Heart
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 07:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Tributes
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Against thee sunlit moon, of day,
my womb within, I carry thee,
of my flesh, and labored breath,
truimph of my heart, he be,
Wouldst' on October morn,
become then, my greatest joy,
pure of heart, in angel infancy,
of my own flesh, a boy,
Be such, a sight, of truest love,
my breast, I then lay ...... he,
In my eyes, no other could,
take this, my heart, from me,
Angel of pure infancy,
thee riches, of my soul,
displayed upon my everyday,
my truimph, made so whole,
No other couldst, give such effect,
I, subdue'd, by such a sight,
in every conscious way, My Travis,
your the truimph, of my life!
Copyright ©
Valerie_Pearson
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2003-01-22 07:40:00]
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Re: Duke of My Heart
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by Fwog on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:21:14 AM AEST
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Hi Val,
What a beautiful write, these sentiments expressed here are so pure of thought. I am so happy for you Val to be so blessed. And I am so rapt you have Travis.
Hugz
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Re: Duke of My Heart
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 09:09:03 AM AEST
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What a fine lovely tribute to your son Valerie this is so beautiful....i hope he saw this ....he'll treasure it ....i enjoyed this one ....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Duke of My Heart
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 09:29:23 AM AEST
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You are a very gifted writer. I have been reading many of your poems this morning and am awestruck ...and this one is perfect.. " The Garden of Autism "draws me in particular and I have left a comment there.
Chrissie |
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Re: Duke of My Heart
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 10:11:22 AM AEST
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Val,your words always get to me,they are just beautiful & full of love! This was pure beauty!
I so loved this due to I have two boys! Great write! Christina |
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Re: Duke of My Heart
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 11:45:48 AM AEST
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Valerie So that's what it's like! Thanks for taking me there. At least one has an incling of the feeling.
I was with my wife in the hours before and saw some of the price you pay when things are not straightforward. We men don't know the half of it. |
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Re: Duke of My Heart
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 02:00:36 PM AEST
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| This is a very beautiful tribute to your son Valerie. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Duke of My Heart
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 05:22:30 PM AEST
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| What beautiful words for your son - I know this feeling so well, but you have written it to perfection. Awesome write. |
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Re: Duke of My Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 01:40:18 PM AEST
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| Awww Valerie!! Ack I'm in tears! So Beautifully written, and to top it off it hits home so deep because my son will be 15 in a week, and he lives elsewhere, Ahhhhh I love it, huggs and love and beauty always to you and yours.. give that cutie a hugg from me 'cause I can't hugg mine.. love Nessa |
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Re: Duke of My Heart
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by Lone_er on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 02:39:29 PM AEST
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An amazing write maam. Such a tribute to your son, and I dare say, his mother who bears no small responsibility for her childrens understanding. Wish I could write with as much love and honest humility. Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to meet him thru your words.
Russ |
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Re: Duke of My Heart
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by Mystery_Girl on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 11:22:38 PM AEST
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| Awwww....This is so nice....for i too have a 15 year old son......what a lovely write......take care....tanya.....:-) |
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Re: Duke of My Heart
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 08:11:04 PM AEST
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beautiful a true showing of a mother's love
Sharon |
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Re: Duke of My Heart
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by LadyDama on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 01:30:04 AM AEST
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| precious and devoted... a mother after my own heart... thank you |
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Re: Duke of My Heart
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by Bizzy on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 09:48:24 PM AEST
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Dear Valerie, What a wonderful skill you have and what a wonderful blessing you have in your son! Treasure every day, but prepare him to fly away someday. I could relate to your message and just adored your style. Its the first one of your poems that I'v read.
Bizzy |
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