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Array ( [sid] => 10926 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Animal [time] => 2003-01-22 06:40:00 [hometext] => I was beaten and molested by my father. This is just one of the poems i wrote displaying my anger to him. I know it's graphic, but how can you have anything but that in this situation? [bodytext] => A child looks up at his father
He looks into those hard eyes
wishing that when he grew up
he could be just like him
"Father...I love you"
The boys father looks down at his son frowning
and hits him with full force
The man smiles when his son hits the floor,
mouth bleeding
Yet the boys idolizes his father
Such a joke this was
Behind closed doors,
the true nature of the man was revealed
He lays next to his son real close
and mates with him like an animal
who can distingiush
between animal and man?
"Come here son..." the man says
"Come play with me"
How foolish the boy was
why hadn't he tried to stop it?
Why did the man do it?
Was it some sickness deep inside?
No
He did it for pleasure
He did it for power
He did it... because he liked it
How long have I wished
that I could go to him and ask why?
How I have yearned to slit his throat
to feel the blade cutting through the layers of skin
To dig inside and drink the blood.
To drink and feed like an animal.
He was an animal.
Only animals can produce more animals,
and that is what he has done.
Who can distinguish between animal and man? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 13 [informant] => vampirictiger [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Animal

Contributed by vampirictiger on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 06:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



A child looks up at his father
He looks into those hard eyes
wishing that when he grew up
he could be just like him
"Father...I love you"
The boys father looks down at his son frowning
and hits him with full force
The man smiles when his son hits the floor,
mouth bleeding
Yet the boys idolizes his father
Such a joke this was
Behind closed doors,
the true nature of the man was revealed
He lays next to his son real close
and mates with him like an animal
who can distingiush
between animal and man?
"Come here son..." the man says
"Come play with me"
How foolish the boy was
why hadn't he tried to stop it?
Why did the man do it?
Was it some sickness deep inside?
No
He did it for pleasure
He did it for power
He did it... because he liked it
How long have I wished
that I could go to him and ask why?
How I have yearned to slit his throat
to feel the blade cutting through the layers of skin
To dig inside and drink the blood.
To drink and feed like an animal.
He was an animal.
Only animals can produce more animals,
and that is what he has done.
Who can distinguish between animal and man?




Copyright © vampirictiger ... [ 2003-01-22 06:40:00]
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Re: Animal (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 11:10:26 PM AEST
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please go seek help


Re: Animal (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 12:04:19 AM AEST
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Yes u need to tell someone what happened. Get the justice you deserve... I can't describe how this poem made me feel.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Animal (User Rating: 1 )
by BABYGIRLAL28 on Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 11:36:56 AM AEST
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i'm so sorry..have u now as an adult asked him why??




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