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Array ( [sid] => 109252 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hatred [time] => 2005-11-07 18:27:42 [hometext] => I wrote this in about 10 min......when i was a little upset about some things....... [bodytext] => What is this pain i feel
why does it seem so real
you are there, i am here
what is it that i fear
dreams and nightmears arise
all i want to know is if i will survive
where i am going i do not know
but who i will be is starting to show

*im feeling hatred and frustrated
tore into two
where is it that im going
will it ever be with you
she's taken your time
she's taken that place
now im here with time to waste
maybe sometime it will be seen
maybe someday it will be me*

what is this pride i feel
why is it so surreal
you are taking all these dreams
you are making them real for me
time and tears fade
and all i want it to arrive
where we will be going i cant say
but im turning around and falling away

*im feeling hatred and frustrated
tore into two
where is it that im going
will it ever be with you
she's taken your time
she's taken that place
now im here with time to waste
maybe sometime it will be seen
maybe someday it will be me*

who am i now
who is it you see
ive placed that space
it was torn from my face
im running in my mind
im going away
but all i want is to stay
all i want is to belong
all i want is to STAY!

*im feeling hatred and frustrated
tore into two
where is it that im going
will it ever be with you
she's taken your time
she's taken that place
now im here with time to waste
maybe sometime it will be seen
maybe someday it will be me*

maybe sometime we will see
maybe someday we will be
but till then im just me
the only me that i can be
and whats done is done
im gone
maybe sometime it will be seen
im feeling hated and frustrated
torn into two........maybe someday it will all be seen
But i dont think it will be with you
I dont think its gonna be me





[comments] => 2 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Drmbeliever [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Hatred

Contributed by Drmbeliever on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 06:27:42 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



What is this pain i feel
why does it seem so real
you are there, i am here
what is it that i fear
dreams and nightmears arise
all i want to know is if i will survive
where i am going i do not know
but who i will be is starting to show

*im feeling hatred and frustrated
tore into two
where is it that im going
will it ever be with you
she's taken your time
she's taken that place
now im here with time to waste
maybe sometime it will be seen
maybe someday it will be me*

what is this pride i feel
why is it so surreal
you are taking all these dreams
you are making them real for me
time and tears fade
and all i want it to arrive
where we will be going i cant say
but im turning around and falling away

*im feeling hatred and frustrated
tore into two
where is it that im going
will it ever be with you
she's taken your time
she's taken that place
now im here with time to waste
maybe sometime it will be seen
maybe someday it will be me*

who am i now
who is it you see
ive placed that space
it was torn from my face
im running in my mind
im going away
but all i want is to stay
all i want is to belong
all i want is to STAY!

*im feeling hatred and frustrated
tore into two
where is it that im going
will it ever be with you
she's taken your time
she's taken that place
now im here with time to waste
maybe sometime it will be seen
maybe someday it will be me*

maybe sometime we will see
maybe someday we will be
but till then im just me
the only me that i can be
and whats done is done
im gone
maybe sometime it will be seen
im feeling hated and frustrated
torn into two........maybe someday it will all be seen
But i dont think it will be with you
I dont think its gonna be me









Copyright © Drmbeliever ... [ 2005-11-07 18:27:42]
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Re: Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 06:46:23 PM AEST
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this is very emotional, some lines are kind of awk. just because of the way they sound, but for a 10min write this is pretty good.


Re: Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by grim6669 on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 03:15:00 PM AEST
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i really like it AND it left me without words...wow
*~amber~*




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