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Array ( [sid] => 109250 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Switch Blade [time] => 2005-11-07 17:22:28 [hometext] => This is the right version of Switch blade! i mistakenly put the unedited version on yesterday! let me know what you think of this oneLOL! [bodytext] => My head keeps spinning
all these thought in my head
and they stand there grinning
and I feel dead

You ask me why I’m bleeding
its you I fought
you hear my heart beating
it all in your thoughts

Like a switch blade in your side
you pray to god your not the one they find
and if you promise I'll stick this needle in your eye

lord if I die before I wake
all the sins I’ve made these days
take my soul and make it ache
I know I’m going to hell anyways

you will see me scream and hear me fall
it sounds messed up but its just right
I must of heard wrong when you said it all
I’m in the dark hiding from the light

Like a switch blade in your side
man they took you for a ride
but it wasn't you it was me who died [comments] => 3 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 34 [informant] => russ-dawg [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Switch Blade

Contributed by russ-dawg on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 05:22:28 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

My head keeps spinning
all these thought in my head
and they stand there grinning
and I feel dead

You ask me why I’m bleeding
its you I fought
you hear my heart beating
it all in your thoughts

Like a switch blade in your side
you pray to god your not the one they find
and if you promise I'll stick this needle in your eye

lord if I die before I wake
all the sins I’ve made these days
take my soul and make it ache
I know I’m going to hell anyways

you will see me scream and hear me fall
it sounds messed up but its just right
I must of heard wrong when you said it all
I’m in the dark hiding from the light

Like a switch blade in your side
man they took you for a ride
but it wasn't you it was me who died

Copyright Â© russ-dawg ... [ 2005-11-07 17:22:28]
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Re: Switch Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 05:41:28 PM AEST
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wow like a super ball this poem bounces all over interesting way to write
r.m.wilder

Re: Switch Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by russ-dawg on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 05:47:09 PM AEST
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Lostrelic i don't know wether to say thanks or huh? LOL!

Re: Switch Blade (User Rating: 1 )
by Freak-of-the-Week on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 01:51:44 PM AEST
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lol, i second that....how come i never get comments like that? :P

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