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That day I planned it perfectly
That night when I got home I was going to do it
Then I saw him for some unknown reason
He was there waiting for me
All he did was ask me one simple question
WILL YOU GO OUT WITH ME?
Thats all it took, was for him to ask
That night I went home with no thought of suicide

The reason I was going to kill myself was for him
but he came to him before it was to late
He does not know how close I was
Nobody did but he will know and so will everyone else

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My life saved

Contributed by RebelRose on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 04:51:02 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

One night I almost took my life
That day I planned it perfectly
That night when I got home I was going to do it
Then I saw him for some unknown reason
He was there waiting for me
All he did was ask me one simple question
WILL YOU GO OUT WITH ME?
Thats all it took, was for him to ask
That night I went home with no thought of suicide

The reason I was going to kill myself was for him
but he came to him before it was to late
He does not know how close I was
Nobody did but he will know and so will everyone else

Copyright © RebelRose ... [ 2005-11-07 16:51:02]
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Re: My life saved (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 05:00:30 PM AEST
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this is a very good poem and im glad u didnt do that cause who would i have to talk to if u did cant wait for the next one bye

DEMON

Re: My life saved (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 05:13:53 PM AEST
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wow life is of no value now a days is it i hope things work out for you and i hope you find out life is more then a guy
r.m.wilder

Re: My life saved (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike_BH on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 06:24:22 PM AEST
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even though i do like the poem i hate the way most of your poems are focused around suicide if you tried to wright more happier poems about us instead of sad ones about yourself and me then maybe youd be just a snidge happier and even if that doesnt make you a snidge happier...ill be there in the end to make your life better and to save you life like a did before

I love you and dont ever forget that dont ever let that love slip away you hold my heart now take care of it

Re: My life saved (User Rating: 1 )
by coolbreeze17 on Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 11:53:56 PM AEST
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im not sure if i like this poem....but all n all its
your emotions.

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