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Array ( [sid] => 109238 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => caught in a circle. [time] => 2005-11-07 14:43:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm stuck in a circle
The lines growing closer
Have enveloped me
and my entire being
I've walked this line 1000 times
I'm entrenched by these walls i've created
No helping hand in sight,
No light to pierce the night
I am my worst enemy
I'm ensnared by sin
I've fallen again
Lust weighs down my shoulder
I'm tied to a boulder
Trapped, at the bottom of the sea
Just lust, just sin, just me.
I yell I'm unclean!
I shout I'm not pure!
I scream Please Forigive me!
I cry for the cure.
It's right in front of me.
I just don't take it.
This sin, Can't shake it.
This circle, Can't break it
So I just fake it...
How dare I mistake it..
As something to be taken advantage of.
I'm sorry.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 308 [topic] => 61 [informant] => tecnorobo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

caught in a circle.

Contributed by tecnorobo on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 02:43:40 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I'm stuck in a circle
The lines growing closer
Have enveloped me
and my entire being
I've walked this line 1000 times
I'm entrenched by these walls i've created
No helping hand in sight,
No light to pierce the night
I am my worst enemy
I'm ensnared by sin
I've fallen again
Lust weighs down my shoulder
I'm tied to a boulder
Trapped, at the bottom of the sea
Just lust, just sin, just me.
I yell I'm unclean!
I shout I'm not pure!
I scream Please Forigive me!
I cry for the cure.
It's right in front of me.
I just don't take it.
This sin, Can't shake it.
This circle, Can't break it
So I just fake it...
How dare I mistake it..
As something to be taken advantage of.
I'm sorry.

Copyright © tecnorobo ... [ 2005-11-07 14:43:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: caught in a circle. (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 02:53:18 PM AEST
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well the best thing about being huiman is that we can pick our selves back up
cool write
r.m.wilder

Re: caught in a circle. (User Rating: 1 )
by Dying_Angel on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 04:00:34 PM AEST
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i love this. so much. xx

Re: caught in a circle. (User Rating: 1 )
by nannerz on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 09:14:54 PM AEST
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this is really food lots of emotion and all that jazz

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