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Array ( [sid] => 109211 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Saving Yours is Breaking Mine. [time] => 2005-11-06 22:41:22 [hometext] => For anyone who has fallen in love and had to end it.. you get it. It hurts. But it was meant too, right? [bodytext] => It's been over a year now
We've been through this before
The truth is only bringing me down
And I'm not used to being unsure
Broke your heart the first time
I could never do it again
But saving yours is breaking mine
And I'm starting to regret the things I said
Never thought it would come to this
Though I knew it wouldn't last forever
There's nothing more dangerous than a kiss
And I did it..it was my choice we weren't together
I don't mean to play with your head
You know me better than that
But my confidence is dead
And I would hate for this to last
It's not fair to you
It's not fair to me
This isn't something I would purposely do
This isn't the person I want to be
There are reasons I don't understand
And I suppose I never will
I'm haunted by the look on your face
The day I said it was over
That's something I don't want to retrace
But I can't stay for the wrong reasons
I can't stay for the wrong reasons..
I can't keep pretending
To keep from a not-so-happy ending
Here I am again
Stuck in something I've created
It's times like these I need a cigarette
But I won't..I won't for you
I won't forget what we had
And I'm so sorry that it has to end.
I'm so sorry. x/3
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Saving Yours is Breaking Mine.

Contributed by sheaa on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 10:41:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



It's been over a year now
We've been through this before
The truth is only bringing me down
And I'm not used to being unsure
Broke your heart the first time
I could never do it again
But saving yours is breaking mine
And I'm starting to regret the things I said
Never thought it would come to this
Though I knew it wouldn't last forever
There's nothing more dangerous than a kiss
And I did it..it was my choice we weren't together
I don't mean to play with your head
You know me better than that
But my confidence is dead
And I would hate for this to last
It's not fair to you
It's not fair to me
This isn't something I would purposely do
This isn't the person I want to be
There are reasons I don't understand
And I suppose I never will
I'm haunted by the look on your face
The day I said it was over
That's something I don't want to retrace
But I can't stay for the wrong reasons
I can't stay for the wrong reasons..
I can't keep pretending
To keep from a not-so-happy ending
Here I am again
Stuck in something I've created
It's times like these I need a cigarette
But I won't..I won't for you
I won't forget what we had
And I'm so sorry that it has to end.
I'm so sorry. x/3




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Re: Saving Yours is Breaking Mine. (User Rating: 1 )
by KaylaNoelHohn on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 10:47:23 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this. Very well written... I think you chose the perfect words.. said it all, without saying to much.


Re: Saving Yours is Breaking Mine. (User Rating: 1 )
by ToriVeigh on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 11:11:54 PM AEST
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The writing is good, the choice sucks! You presented it well.


Re: Saving Yours is Breaking Mine. (User Rating: 1 )
by Faddy on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 01:11:14 AM AEST
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you said exactly how you felt, very plainly. awesomely written not to simple and to complicated. loved it


Re: Saving Yours is Breaking Mine. (User Rating: 1 )
by mrpeanut64 on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 05:04:41 PM AEST
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Sometimes Life sucks, and you must make your decisions on how you feel at the time. In trying to spare someone you care about pain now, may only increase the heartache later on because eventually it will happen.


Re: Saving Yours is Breaking Mine. (User Rating: 1 )
by christsfollower on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 06:49:36 PM AEST
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wow. I loved the poem, took me back to one of my relationships. also, nice rhyming: its not always easy to do. keep em coming!

~~Isaiah




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