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Array ( [sid] => 109208 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => He's Gone [time] => 2005-11-06 21:16:55 [hometext] => I wrote this poem about my friend that I happen to be in love with and sadly watched his heart get broken [bodytext] => He’s Gone

He sits there alone
Cold and confused
He is free of the sickness
The torment and abuse

He’s hiding from the darkness
Sheltered by the light
He’s lost in his own world
So filled with fright

He watched his whole world
Fall deep into despair
He thought of only one thing
And he realized how much she didn’t care

So as he watched the lights fade
And sunrise turn to dusk
He said his goodbyes to his world
And he became lost in the dust

By: René R. Gemme
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He's Gone

Contributed by PoisonousPyscho on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 09:16:55 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

He’s Gone

He sits there alone
Cold and confused
He is free of the sickness
The torment and abuse

He’s hiding from the darkness
Sheltered by the light
He’s lost in his own world
So filled with fright

He watched his whole world
Fall deep into despair
He thought of only one thing
And he realized how much she didn’t care

So as he watched the lights fade
And sunrise turn to dusk
He said his goodbyes to his world
And he became lost in the dust

By: René R. Gemme

Copyright Â© PoisonousPyscho ... [ 2005-11-06 21:16:55]
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Re: He's Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 09:40:17 PM AEST
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You weave the words into a poetic syrup that flows onto the page and entrances the reader. How do you do it? You truely have talent. Kudos!

*Madame Kitty*
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Re: He's Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by BEBE on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 10:04:52 PM AEST
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I loved how you wrote this, very nice job
BEBE

Re: He's Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by tears_of_blood on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 01:20:12 AM AEST
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good poem you used all the right words they make you feel every thing keep it up.

Re: He's Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by mrpeanut64 on Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 05:13:36 PM AEST
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nice write

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