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Array ( [sid] => 109193 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sickened and Torn [time] => 2005-11-06 17:33:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The Clouds grow black the rain is near for this is the night i've always feared. With one love inhale what is hate exhale so taken away, but so nice to see this place and be kissed from that of an almost heavenly face.Scraping the walls of inner torment and i'm locked within once again.Draw me a line so i can wear away and decline taken back better this time my dangerous place of mine.Inhale, breathing in the mistress that has me on my knees. It's been so long since I have been to my honest home. now it's cold there and i'm alone.Butchered and weathered I sing my song.Please please don't take so long.line her up inhale her in she's such a dirty sin.This night has only just begun.I barely know where to stand.And I reach out but there is no hand.now im back as i watch my life i fought back.I tear it all till theres nothing left.it's almost like that of an unfair theft.To fight till death.
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Sickened and Torn

Contributed by FairyfireFly on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 05:33:41 PM in AEST
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The Clouds grow black the rain is near for this is the night i've always feared. With one love inhale what is hate exhale so taken away, but so nice to see this place and be kissed from that of an almost heavenly face.Scraping the walls of inner torment and i'm locked within once again.Draw me a line so i can wear away and decline taken back better this time my dangerous place of mine.Inhale, breathing in the mistress that has me on my knees. It's been so long since I have been to my honest home. now it's cold there and i'm alone.Butchered and weathered I sing my song.Please please don't take so long.line her up inhale her in she's such a dirty sin.This night has only just begun.I barely know where to stand.And I reach out but there is no hand.now im back as i watch my life i fought back.I tear it all till theres nothing left.it's almost like that of an unfair theft.To fight till death.

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Re: Sickened and Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 08:18:39 PM AEST
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Good write. Strong feelings there. Stay Safe .
Thanks fer sharing

Whisper

Re: Sickened and Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by Nichelle on Thursday, 12th October 2006 @ 09:26:50 AM AEST
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wow..gripping
Nichelle

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