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Array ( [sid] => 109175 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why Me [time] => 2005-11-06 08:31:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why is it me that you make so mad
a day started good, just got bad

You hide things from me
but I can see

The truth hurts when not given right
dont do this to me again another night

Play with my heart, then tear at it with a knife,
who makes you judge and jury of my life

I will stand strong and not back down
you smile at me, I will frown

Goin to take these words and use them against you
make your empty promises come true

Tonite I start to live again, you will not be my
friend,
Then you will be the one to say Why me? again. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 6 [informant] => memories_mist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Why Me

Contributed by memories_mist on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 08:31:45 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Why is it me that you make so mad
a day started good, just got bad

You hide things from me
but I can see

The truth hurts when not given right
dont do this to me again another night

Play with my heart, then tear at it with a knife,
who makes you judge and jury of my life

I will stand strong and not back down
you smile at me, I will frown

Goin to take these words and use them against you
make your empty promises come true

Tonite I start to live again, you will not be my
friend,
Then you will be the one to say Why me? again.

Copyright © memories_mist ... [ 2005-11-06 08:31:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Why Me (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 08:41:16 AM AEST
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wow a very strong emotional poem...if you ask me i think you should get out of this relationship if its getting that bad...all the luck in the world
Luv
Jenni
xxxx

Re: Why Me (User Rating: 1 )
by XxXMcCathyXxX on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 08:53:30 AM AEST
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Wowie very good i love the emotion and rhyming WELL DONE EXCELLENT!

Re: Why Me (User Rating: 1 )
by tiggytom on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 09:34:46 AM AEST
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enjoyed your poem why oh why lol

Re: Why Me (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 11:00:39 AM AEST
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Wow intense emotion!
Hmmm if things are this bad then it is best to walk away from it... this poem is wrote in such a talented way that it flows even though it is very angry! i really enjoyed reading it

luv
Gen xx

Re: Why Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 05:50:12 PM AEST
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A very well written piece of poetry filled with anger and emotion. A relationship like that is not healthy. I suggest you leave and start afresh. I love your style of writing, keep up the great work. Good luck and may you see brighter days ahead.
*hugs*
sue

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