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Array ( [sid] => 109161 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To The Best Friend I Let Go [time] => 2005-11-06 02:52:32 [hometext] => I wrote this poem to a ex-girlfriend that I had previously been friends with for 6 years. We broke up and didn't talk for 2 months until I wrote her this poem and she called me. [bodytext] => We always thought
That we were meant to be.
Forever and ever
You and me.

I had a feeling
I had a change of heart.
Now, for ever and ever
We are apart.

I miss you more
Than you will ever know.
I miss the old times
The places we used to go.

It’s hard to think about
The things that I have done.
I wish we could work it out
I wish I hadn’t run.

I’m sorry for the tears I’ve caused
I wish I could take them back.
But words are worse than anything
How’d we get off track?

We always thought
That we were meant to be.
What happened to us
What happened to you and me?
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 338 [topic] => 50 [informant] => Bryan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
To The Best Friend I Let Go

Contributed by Bryan on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 02:52:32 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



We always thought
That we were meant to be.
Forever and ever
You and me.

I had a feeling
I had a change of heart.
Now, for ever and ever
We are apart.

I miss you more
Than you will ever know.
I miss the old times
The places we used to go.

It’s hard to think about
The things that I have done.
I wish we could work it out
I wish I hadn’t run.

I’m sorry for the tears I’ve caused
I wish I could take them back.
But words are worse than anything
How’d we get off track?

We always thought
That we were meant to be.
What happened to us
What happened to you and me?




Copyright © Bryan ... [ 2005-11-06 02:52:32]
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Re: To The Best Friend I Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Kuro_Mirai on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 04:45:26 AM AEST
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I can relate, it's hard losing a friend you were really close to. Great poem.


Re: To The Best Friend I Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 12:41:20 PM AEST
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Bryan, Don't give up on her. If it is meant to be, it will be. More emotion in a poem could bring her around but all in all it is a good straight forward write............Mike


Re: To The Best Friend I Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 12:50:32 PM AEST
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i cant relate...you've got to keep going...if you still love her you have to go get her and proove it...great poem...well done keep it up
Luv
jenni
xxxx


Re: To The Best Friend I Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by kaysea on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 02:27:40 PM AEST
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love this poem
maybe this is what it will take to bring her back to you
best of luck


Re: To The Best Friend I Let Go (User Rating: 1 )
by cm on Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 11:04:20 PM AEST
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Hello Bryan,
I thought, to the best friend I let go, was a very good poem. It's very bittersweet, and filled with a lot of emotions. I thought you did a great job putting this peice together. It flowed pretty smoothly, which made it easy to follow.I loved the way you ended it with a question. Good Job!




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